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pot1ent 10-05-03 09:14 AM

...::NO Going Back::...
 
Stuck in a position just like a beginning
Making compostions on mics for winning


My status is gone and ain't getting it back
Am I Bothered?
Positively I quickly shone while repping rap
Im not sure..
Defecting tracks so I'm cutting my past out
But now I hover
Never used to, now concocting math of lout
Got no cure..
Like aids this new life invades me with death
Will I die?
Never complain i can't pertain to spit the best
I'm not sure..
Never the best before but i'm closer to hip hop
Now I'm fly..
I wish i could go back!! Hate how clips popped
Seen Mature
Is it really?
Only when i lecture literature do peeple feel me
I'm not sure
Lifes mixed me up and It seems im going shortly
I'm so Silly
Trying to transfer troubles into representive text
I was lured
Never going back!! that was an exspensive hex
To be hip hop
To stick dots..

I'm just enfurling my furthering of the english language..
Evolving myself controling whats delt so i don't damage..
My life again, then be famished for fame in my fascia
I'm done busy busting alliteration so I will see ya later
If i go too far then theres no turning back to the old
Involved in shit so deep I am it and reap the control
Deceived my hold so now I'm gripping a new beginning
Gripping my crew..wuRd.. i'm always due to shimmering

pot1ent 10-05-03 09:25 AM

I tried new style just because it was fun...but the prodda wasn't very good...I spose cuz it was first time with the style and all...anyway uppin for feedback

K-Dubb 10-05-03 10:05 AM

I'm not sure how you got those otha lines in tha beat, but it was alright. But I don really like tha style right now, but that's jus' me. Pretty good tho'

pot1ent 10-05-03 10:10 AM

Yeah I know the style doens't suit...but i wanted to try someting different...The shorter lines would've been echos if it was audio...

Pz

Menik 10-05-03 02:43 PM

Yeah this was alright for a new style...the title of it caught my attention and lured me in lol...but it was a good read...it was structured alright i thought, not used to the way its set up but its good...overall it was a pretty good drop...keep dropping.


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