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ShEmY 10-05-03 12:24 PM

YoungWhiteThug19 vs. JOeY TeRRIFYING
 
Rules:
I set it up
You drop first
No Hate
No D.R.
15-30 Lines
No Crew.

Lets do this!

JOeY TeRRIFYING 10-05-03 09:12 PM

i didnt even know of this so i guess im checkin in
quiet attempts foe no shows got me wreckin kids
u called me out but im going first thats very lame
kid you is the herb that was smoked by mary jane
fuck ya ferry name i barley came 2 end this duh joke
dont think i won't eat ya alive and shit out ya hope
im dope & staying grungy keepin my flows raunchy
JT is a old dog that shittin in the shoe of monoploy
doubt you can stop me u battlin with out purpose
im puttin in my 2 cents by considerin ya worthless
going with 1/3 of the bar limits to scrape ya wittless
since time is money no thugs worth over 15 mintues

ILLunatic 10-05-03 09:24 PM

BLAH!!!

YOU WACK.....
YoungWhiteThug19 GONNA RIP YOU.....
You Juss Signed Ya Deathwish....
ELEVATE TONZ......

JOeY TeRRIFYING 10-05-03 09:28 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by ILLunatic
BLAH!!!

YOU WACK.....
YoungWhiteThug19 GONNA RIP YOU.....
You Juss Signed Ya Deathwish....
ELEVATE TONZ......

and you love the cock. kid get off me with ya lame ass

ILLunatic 10-05-03 09:30 PM

Nigga....
I'D Rip You Worst Than YoungWhiteThug Will.....
I Suggest You Not Talk Shit......................
If You Gonna Talk Shit
How Bout We Do Some Audio...
Or Text....
Since You Prolly Aint Hit Puberty
And You Dont Want Kids Laughin At You...
Which They Gonna Laugh At You Anyways
But Yea.....

JOeY TeRRIFYING 10-05-03 09:32 PM

^ kid your dumb and since this aint your battle why you puttin in comments. so like said before ya lame off my tip

ILLunatic 10-05-03 09:38 PM

I'm Puttin In Comments
Because.....
Thats What You Sappose To Do
In Other Peoples Battles
Post COMMENTS...
And Thats Exactly What I Did.....
And You Tryin To Start Shit.....

JOeY TeRRIFYING 10-05-03 09:41 PM

your a freeposter a sad sad freeposter when ya tryin to sway votes before ya homeboy even posted his verse. still going wit my original thoughts
you = lame

ShEmY 10-07-03 11:08 PM

This is bull-shit ya'll. Who knows who's gonna win. I don't want any votes swayed my way lets just see what happens. Im droppin my verse. My computers working again.

ShEmY 10-07-03 11:25 PM

Ima Murda Dis Kid
 
Nigga you 'crazy' going against me I make ya 'aftermath' feel 'shady'.//1

Every single one of your lines is played out, this battle would have gotten more 'reaction' if you and Michael Jackson would have made out.//2

I don't know why Im seeking competition thats really this 'misplaced', I love to rub shit up in the new kids face.//3

Bitch Im the 'Herb'? I've almost been here a year, you've been here half a month battleing the best you get what you 'deserve'.//4

I aint throwing lines at you - Im spoonin it.. Admit - you just wanted your dick rode by "Illunatic".//5

This is an automatic win comin at my battle record, JT is even begging Thugd-Out-Mic to be accepted.//6 (Both Bitches)

This is a cruel form of murder in 'text', you think you a big shot go battle "Brooklyn" next.//7

One thing you don't deserve is this post, I've already you gave you too much publicity but whoopin yo ass in dis roast.//8

Lemme ask you a question and aint nobody lieing, how come you the one crying if JOeY's so TeRRIFYING.//9

Your check-in midaswell of been your verse, this threads gettin hits more than Jay-Z's "The Gift and The Curse".//10

Finisher:
Like Illunatic said, heres yo death certificate wheres yo 'signiature', right now me and yo girl is pickin out yo coffin 'confixture'.//11




JOeY TeRRIFYING's Death Certificate x.___________________ (sign here please)

ShEmY 10-07-03 11:32 PM

weak verses from both but fuck it. Uppp'n fo votes.
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ShEmY 10-08-03 08:16 AM

C'mon ya'll

Upp'nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn
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Taktik 10-08-03 08:49 AM

Vote Joey

Nice verse...........solid punches, a couple personals, nice flow..........WAY better structure...........

Young...........shorten your lines......10-12 words a line...........

Quotables:

u called me out but im going first thats very lame
kid you is the herb that was smoked by mary jane

^That was nice

*MoF* 10-08-03 08:54 AM

i dunno what u mean 19....
i liked both verses....

flow: joey
punches: 19
creativity: 19
wordplay: none

yo i felt both....but young white took it cuz of betta punches......

please vote on my battles cuz people sleep on:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81852

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78934

ShEmY 10-08-03 04:39 PM

Tatik he had no punches bro. I mean c'mon get off of his dick

IT's str8 I don't really even care.

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