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Mentally Kursed v.s. Rappad(READ RULES BEFORE VOTING)
5 barz/10 lines
no hate, crew, or d/r votes 250+ posts in order to vote structured voting no one line shit in our pm's we agreed on a deadline tomorrow, so let's say by tomorrow noon both verses must be in, even though we'll prob both drop earlier. Good luck to both |
ok as agreed by both...no deadline..both spit whenever we get a chance..
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Killing this Prostitute, You'll Pay For Your Actions Cuz Rappad Beats Whores To Death
Make This Fag "Explode From His Own Hands"...Didn't Think I Was Ill I'll Just Let You "C-4-Yourself"! I'm Bringing The Danger To You Through My Pistols Chamber Torturing MK Will Only Increase My Anger, I'm Dividing Your Anatomy And Leaving No Remainder So Mk, What's Your Story, Your Record Doesn't Mark You In History No Glory, I'll Still Shove My Rhymes Up Your Ass Harder Then A Suppository! Have Ya Tamed Burnin' As The Flames Are Surgin, Got You Wishing You Hadn't Been Ripped, Like Shamed Virgins This Pain's Urgin As He's Slain In Wordin, Make Ya Lose Your Sense Like Greedy Brain Surgeons Fillers Initiate This Sons A Liar, Trust He Couldn't Handle The Spark If He Had GLoves On Wires I'll Shove You Higher Till You Love The Spire, This Kid Could "Burn Albums" And Still Not Recieve "Cover Fire"! |
Aight check it
This microorganism cant rap "tight" so im givin him "directions to be hard"// Its like this pussys loose, givin him a "Microsoft" computer wit a "map card"// Ill divide your head and multiply your body parts into threes// Then distribute them to burned math teachers who suffered from 3rd degree// Punches hit to the dome sendin your thoughts back to puberty bitch// Ill connect a bullet wit your back leavin you wit a seizer on the ground wit a permanent twitch// Ill leave your teeth "thrown up then over" like pukin vomit on a ship and bein sea sick// Obscene spit, your on your knees so much you assume the position like Playmates on lean dick// Leavin your organs "tie dyed" like knottin your tubes and bleachin your intestines// Like Johnny Cage, im tearin out your vertebrae from your mouth while I yank out your spine// |
Both spits was tight...i'll break it down
Metaphors-Mk Punches-Rappad Flow-Mk Structure-MK Vocab-Mk Overall-Mentally Kursed Comments: Rappad what i think that messed u up was den run-on's... It's Not The Length It's Da Content. Mk: Nicely done. Can Yall Vote Honestly On my battle Against Mc Hottie -Thanks- |
aight crew member so all i can give is feedbk.................heres the deal...........i honestly liked both verses coz they both had great creativeness.................mental came hard as usual and rappad jus flowed and hit nice.........good battle ya'll......at least it bk to tha top
hit this up................ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83865 |
uppin fo votes (1)
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Vote-rappad
Ive seen better frum mentally kursed brewakdown Punches-Both Metas-Both Similes-Both Multies-Rappad Vocab-Rappad Creativity-Mental flow-Niehter Basically Rappad took it with better more ocmplex vocabular, and multies, nice shit frum both sides tho Eh rappad i nkow u onlines so please hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83737 You Don't Have 250 Posts... And It Seems Very Much Like D/R... "I Know You Online..." Ima Try To Get You Banned For That... Vote Gone -Axeq |
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^^yo man I appreciate the vote but.....did you vote for me cuz I'm online now and can vote on your battles? Cuz you didn't just drop a link but you said "rappad please hit this up" cuz I don't want d/r to win battles....I want this to be a fair battle.... anyways nice verse MK |
oh...and you don't have 250+ posts.....read rules folks.....MK I'll get a mod to change it....
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^^you dont have 250 post man
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Sorry for disregardin the rules dawg
my bad but i was honest n im not a wack newb, jus a new name and rappd i jus want an honest vote, i dont want u do deliberatly vote for me so please hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83737 |
^^you kno you can get banned for askin somone to vote for you right
i think please dont post in here again ill ask a mod to delete these .................................................. ....................................... |
I didnt ask him to vote for me, did u not see the msg above you kid
thank you This is my last post |
Re: Mentally Kursed v.s. Rappad(READ RULES BEFORE VOTING)
^^its aight jus read the rules if the thread say read the rules
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