Anotha bad dream-holla back yall
 

you cant run, you cant hide yo life is an open field/
i gotta gun its gon' fire so nigga you betta chill/
I'm not a preacher, but I'll put somethin in yo heart tho'/
or dat diaphragm nigga that vest don't go down that low/
call me Ironman boy my beam gon split ya particles/
a snitch like you gon end up in obituary articles/
contemplatin consequences of vehicle homicide/
evaulatin my offenses glancin at this 45/
takin ova yo world like a alien invasion/
in a all black suit like a MIB agent/
so you thinkin I'm playin but Im far from a shitter/
this glock gon be hilarious a true side splitter/
but it'll make you bitter, betta pack it up befo' this lead a/
tear yo leg up, heat yo head up like a mothafuckin sweata/
i'll chop you up like shredded cheddar to serve wit vinigretta/
this baretta make you redda cuz you blushin cuz im betta/
I'll sniff up some ketamines and heat yo house hold/
yo gon smell that damn gasoline on my fuckin southpole/
and I cant be convicted this K gon' leave dat ass evicted/
the bullets gon' nik yo neck, image dipicted should be sicknin/
I'll have yo familly traumatized and talkin to reporters/
How they all saw wit they own eyes the fire come from morters/
my violence has no boarders so i say fuck the court orders/
when these bullets flip and twist and turn yo ass like snowboarders/

Straight?

I though it was alright, a little too many words on some of tha lines that kinda stopped the flow.


takin ova yo world like a alien invasion/
in a all black suit like a MIB agent/

^^didn't rhyme too well

This was alright...it flowed ok kinda lost it at some points...your vocab was pretty good though...you had pretty good metas i thought...your internals were pretty good it helped support the flow...overall it was a alright drop..keep dropping.

Good lookin. I know it seemed like too many words but I can spit em out to make em flow.
Good lookin yall.

Good lookin. I know it seemed like too many words but I can spit em out to make em flow.
Good lookin yall.............................................. .......................

Good lookin. I know it seemed like too many words but I can spit em out to make em flow.
Good lookin yall.............................................. .......................
Invasion
agent
It do rhyme if you dont pronouce the T.

tu regarde la ruliebookology?
(read the rules. no, it didn't make sense)

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