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S.K.O.E. 10-06-03 01:49 AM

"We Drop Bars On Em" Seven Man Freestyle --Jerzy shit right here!
 
Waz crackin rapbattles... been a minute but check this freestyle me and my niggaz did saturday night.... its for this mixtape i'm puttin together--- Shells didnt deserve to be on this beat with Styles lol
order
1. MV
2.Verbal
3.Skripts
4.Snipe
5.S.K.O.E.
6. Kieth Johnson
7. Cautious

peep and drop links when u get time

uno

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/skoemusic.htm

Syntax Mastery 10-06-03 02:00 AM

pretty nice man... i like the beat alot

Johnny 6-feet 10-06-03 05:31 AM

really nice beat. kind of a battle feel to it. Mv's verse was very narrative and sounded like a hungry young rapper, some great one-liners "tounge kissing a glock" a standout.

verbal was better, more emotion, multis, etc.

skripts flow was mental, "president in air force ones" loved that line. how much of this was ACTUALLY freestyled? good imagery

snipe was kind of weak, the start was shaky, he sounded like he was making a news report, kind of quietly angry.

S.K.O.E. load of multis, "body rot" line was great, proper battle verse, very tight punches in places. the breaking sweat line was kind of weak.

Kieth Johnson again, kind of weak, a few multis, some lines dint rhyme, his delivery needs a little work. definite potential though.

Cautious flow was immaculate, a lot of "like" lines, strong multis and imagery. good verse.

great piece overall. good work guys.

YoungPhilly 10-06-03 12:13 PM

Nice job niggas...... that shit was fire... I felt S.K.O.E stood out the most along side with Scripts... but hot shit none the less from the rest of ya. Keep droppin... and look out 4 me

AlcaTrakz 10-06-03 02:46 PM

1. MV - Not bad....nothing super special...kinda was choppy with the flow..too many words in some bars...made him SPEED up and SLOW down the flow...

2.Verbal - LoL @hippo dick.....not bad either

3.Skripts - not bad again....started off blah..then finished up alot better.....

4.Snipe - BLAH....real tired soundin, definitely sounds like he is reading and makin it obvious...no emotion....not even a laid back feel...just dead...not feelin.....had a good flow...but the emotion wasnt there

5.S.K.O.E. - Your voice is different on this.....definitely the most welll rouned verse on this...flow is nice...perfect...LoL masta-baters......nice shit...kobe line...

6. Kieth Johnson - again....the flow....i guess its the delivery...i know cats spit half a bar hold back..then drop the punch..but it seemed like you held onto the punch a split second too long...but this is a good verse...not bad.

7. Cautious - got a flow like someone i know.....this is fire...ran outta breathe or something at one point..but fire flow....nice shit...

overall....good drop fellas....

stay up

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S.K.O.E. 10-06-03 04:13 PM

yo thanks for the replies yo ... appreciate all the props and opinions.......
but yo johnny 6 feet this wasn't actually freestyled.. it's like wheneva u use anotha persons beat like from the real industry and not underground most people call it a freestyle.....

bang bak cuzzins

S.K.O.E. 10-08-03 09:17 PM

waz crackin?
this shit dropped kind of quick
holla at me

OnPagesOffBooks 10-10-03 01:51 AM

First Duddes Purty Nice...Adlibs Kinda Off..Street Vibe Gooinn..Off Beat A Littleee...Emotion Could Beee A Little Bit More Present...Second Dude..More Emotioooonn..LMFAO Hippsopsosmaus Dick..Third Dude Lyrics Solid..Flows Off A Bit...AF1'sss....Sound Like 500...4thh Dude..Flows Niceee...With More Emotion Would Be Sickk..Best Dude So Far...Oh Shiii SKOOEOEIFNME FALMAoo...Jail Time Gotti Gott..Sick Street Ishh...Ray Lewis ROTLMFAO...Kobe Trial...Flows Sickkk...Mater Battorroisflj LMAO Too Many Sckk Liness...Killt It...6thh...50 Cent Hahh..Emotions Nice...Flows Purty Sickkk...LMAO Jerseys Now...7th Nigger Flows Purty Nice...Schemes Sickkk...Playaction LMAO...Ripped Ishh...Purtyyy Sickkk...

KingOfKings 10-10-03 10:33 AM

i liked this track man, good work on this to all but i dont know who it was but 1 guy outshined the others with a better overall verse

BlUnT-MC 10-10-03 12:31 PM

#1 - good flow, sounds like bizzare... or biggie... kinda a mix of both, i'm feelin' his delivery,

#2 - like this cat too, got flow, lmao hippo dick...

#3 - this sound good too, his flow is the best so far..

#4 - this guy's boring, too monotoned, like hova dosin' anti-depresants or sum shit..

#5 - not bad, good lyrics, i like this mans voice.. good mic presence

#6 - this a weird flow, origional style, why is 50- on his dick.. lol..

#7 - this is a sick flow, mad nice style, presence is good.. sounds like sticky at the end...

over all you mans did a nice job on this shit, i was feelin' most the whole thing.. for real, stay up... 1

S.K.O.E. 10-12-03 05:09 PM

i appreciate the replies cuzzins

no doubt we all workin on this mixtape right now so i might post anotha trak soon

peace


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