pine-cone vs the_real_MC
 

bring the heat bitch, 5-15 lines, 15 mins to write from checkin.
everything else is normal rules.

yo this poll only lasts 4 days, so vote fast pleze.
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ya mmmmkay later not now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!................................ .......
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hey mc, i'm gonna make you see/
cause i'm the real one, the rap game is just fun//
see i can abreviate my words/
you better investigate your verse//
cause i'm comming like lurch/
drag you away in my herse// (i'll kill you mofo)
my rhymes will be reported/
yet they will leave your vision distorted//
my rhymes are to complex/
it makes it hard to put them in text//
but i still come on strong like terminator/
i'll exterminate all you impersonators//
this verse aint so great so you can beat it/
unless you want to debate, i'll set the bar, can you meet it?//
you must elevate, make your words better /
your verses i will confensate, destroy them with my sherdder//
and as i leave you there with no verse to spit/
remember my words, " befor you can advcance you must lose, you twit"
and mabie next time you will put up a battle,
i'll leave you in a sea of words, without a paddle//

yo mike, where are you, are ya gonna choke?, bring the heat, and remember my advice bitch.......
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Great verse pine-cone. When is mc gonna step up to the plate? I'll vote again later.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83447

thanks man, i think he is comming a lil later. he was writeing earler today but i gave him some advice so he erased it and is going to write one tonight,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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yo mike where are you, i thougth you were gonna write last night, you had better bring it in computer app today.
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bring da heat bitch......
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mike, u commin or what bitch.
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yea ok dude you can be like that guy lurch, i'll whoop ur ass worse then jamie murch/
go into the woods and find me a piece of burch, come out and swining in front of a church//-1
beat ur ass till you can't stand, like limp bizkit in a band/
you come to and ask to fight just like a demand, try and hit me with ur hand//-2
see the bloody cone, that has a broken bone/
you can't even use the phone, or even moan//-3
just go back to ur tree, i'll cut it down so you can see/
i don't care cuz it was me, see that tree beat ur ass so u can't even pee//-4
leave that clone, that mother fuckin pine-cone, that think that he is a drone/
beat his ass wit that phone, so he will have broken bones, tape his mouth shut so he can't moan//-5
that cone wanna fly, well there a jet that you can buy/
i know that bitch lie, drop a bomb and see that cone die//-6
that cone think he a pro?, fuck that shit that bitch a ho/
he a fuckin slow mo, but that bitch just lays low//-7
he ain't got flow, not even rythem/
so he might just as well go, i'll just go killem//-8

ite the real mc jst got dis close but beta punches n flow u both elavating wel yall keep it up n hit dis up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83858 ........................pz

yo i alrdy voted on dis so can u repay da favor n drop an HONEST vote on 1 of mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83858 thx yall be honest..................................... no d/r...thx.............pz

ok i being honest, think that that pine-cone took this because his made more sense, even though it was really elementary, but just better all around, and the real mc, i think u may need to step ur verse a bit, actually a whole lot, go to the WEC, peace