My "Champions" Verse....Lemme Know...
 

Champions are winnas, Royal N' hyp Throwin' down Served Dinnas...//
Bouncin down Da Streetz, Ridin Spinnas, teachin these Beginnas...//

Coughin' up ur shot juss ta spit ILL but ya skillz gettin killed by childrens Brain Teasers...//
Quiters tryin' to beat champs but steppin' ta us...juss exciting' you teams CheerLeaders..//

We break alot of the fake who thought they would make it hot..//
And you one of'em now how bout' you juss let the real champs take tha spot..//

Hittin 3's like AI, crossin ya up like Hout Sauce N' catchin' winz like Randy Moss..//
Standin' Tall all profit no loss, leave the crowd shook, cuz we distinguished and we Flyin'Across...//

All quiters that hearin' me rappin to this beat, tellin' they friends, he'z bein sarcastic...//
Matching up to Chaps, sayin "Let us have the win" well guess what?...You Can't Have IT!!!

gimme sum pointers and stuff plz...i want it perfect! lol

This Was Aight . . .
If It Was An Audio,
Then It Prolly Sounds
Better . . . You Don't
Word You're Bars Too
Well, It Creates A
Choppy Flow, And It
Seems Like You Put
Too Many Ideas Into
One Bar . . . Work On
That And It'll Come Out
Better . . . If Its An Audio,
PM Me A Link When Its Up

yea it is an audio...i collabin wit hypnotic...i'll let you no...thanks fer the hit up

ne one else?

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Yeah..this was alright....it flowed pretty well i thought...your internals were pretty good, might wanna add some more...you had some good multies, try using some more but they were good...the vocab was pretty good as well...structure was alright could be a little better...but it was a pretty good drop..keep dropping.

*You want WAR lemmie know...on Tour lemmie know

^^^hahah my bad had to do it.
Yea, this was a decent drop. Your vocab was pretty nice, structure was good, you had some good multies and your rhyme sceme was tiight to. Nice drop, keep it up, 1