Im gonna make it
 

one day im gonna make it
niggers talk shit to me but i wont take it
niggers think becuz im white im not tight
but this ill cat is gonna rock da mic
i represent my klan show u who da man
cuz no one can rock da mic like i can
i got potential to blow up
my rhymes are so ill u will want to throw up
i make da illest rapper look like a peice of shit
my 'nuts' must be 'diseasd' cuz i always 'cum sick'
im gonna make it one day, i cant wait
and i am gonna set the record straight

Ok...Use some multies...and try not to rhyme with the same ending but it happens some times lol...and use some internals to help support the flow and it makes it flow better...up your vocab...structure needs some work too....but keep elavating...and you will get better...and keep dropping.