Liba dee VS Da_Renegade
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all rule applies drop in 20 mins |
fa sho....respecting people to vote on this one...i gotta feeling that no1 will (LOL) no crew/hate/d/r.......drop.
respect |
You've all come to witness Renegades assassination/
With this battle in commence you see his health deterioration/ Have a celebration, at this fuckwits funeral/ while i spit in his coffin and use his grave like a public urinal/ Professional Dick Ryder, They call him the RB bicycle/ Coz hes ridden so many kidds hes turning into Micheal (Jackson)/ Blows for votes, but he'll always suck at battlin/ Think he'd been sat on by Biggie, coz his rhymes have all been flattened/ Like a parasite he hangs around and feeds off RB's finest/ Thats another plus for me, and for this Bastard..its a minus/ He's a bitch on Easy E's he thinks hes elevating/ This cunt just got burned worse than he will at his cremation/ Rene's a fuckin lead balloon, he never 'rises' to the challenge/ He may be the PRINCE of milkin hoes, but he's the PAUPER boy of rapping/ Like a parasite, |
(that 'like a parasite' line is NOT supposed to be on the end, it just ended up that way when i posted it so ignore it!Its supposed to be in the middle in the line 'Like a parasite he hangs around...' but not at the end)
thank you |
How can this bitch elevate when I clipped both her wings?|
This merkin gon make her "give a fuck" for votes to win| >>>Check her profile 2-4 means you half ill........half wack| But your verse is like 'school lunches', 99% CRAP| You, MJ and Hazy? Does RB stands for RETARDED BITCHES?| Trust me that I'll leave her like Chucky's face with a hunnit stitches| I'm ruthless, punches all up in your grill like toothpicks| Thought y'sold your 'soul' to 'Bloodz' when 'stains' recolored y' new 'kicks'| |
OK HERE DIS IS HONEST LIBA GOT DIS SHE HAD ALOT MRE STRUCTURE PACKED IN HER RAP N ALOT BETA PUNCHES DO RENES VERSE WAS OK IT DIDNT RLY HIT HARD UNLIKE LIBAS DISSES. HIT DIS UP N B HONEST THX http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83858 ...........................PZ
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uppin for votes
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yo i cant vote but for what it is worth, i think renegade got this...it was short and sweet and got to the point. liba's verse was hard to follow and i found her ryhmes corny. noth def need to elevate.
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^^^ i agree Rene's verse was short and sweet it was all that was needed to sway my vote in his direction. Both need to elevate.
Best Line - 2-4 means you half ill........half wack| But your verse is like 'school lunches', 99% CRAP| VOTE- RENEGADE |
Yo this is the layout and fuckin newbs stop voting if ya can't poll are ya idiots well
LD= her verse was better overall but the punchlines she has used were played out and kinda weak Rene= his verse overall wasn't that tight but i liked the metas and punchlines he dropped they standing out more and shit Vote=Rene |
k, uppin for mo votes
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uppin...honest votes only.......
lol god, i dint think i was that bad..................... come on vote on this for either of us, eh heh! |
n e 1 care to cast a vote on this, wont take a minute, but you'll be doing both of us a favour, be fair, no crew/hate/ or dick ryding. You know the rules, i'm sure. Thank you for being honest.
RESPECT |
opener:renegade
closer:tie wordplay:liba dee structure:tie flow:renegade punches:tie personals:renegade wordplay:liba dee my vote:renegade hit this up peeps http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84191 |
uppin for more votes
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