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dw vs GBPusha22
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you first i set no c h dr votes |
alrite listen!
Im RAW like SUSHI pushin bullets like an uzi/ U Sayin u ILL but you spit BUBBLES like a JACUZZI/ Like a HURRICANE I “knock u off ur feet”/ You just fresh MEAT in the OVEN while im packin the HEAT/ GB bein buried alive, five feet bitch under the dirt/ Cos like vodka I leave you LEGLESS so ya shirt is a skirt/ I kill n make it hurt, u heard of violence?/ Im the definition open ya mouth n be left in silence/ Comin wiv MURDERS shud address me SERIAL/ I like things FRESH like milk from ya mums tits on my breakfast CEREAL/ Now you! N quik! Match my time! |
checkin in ill spit in a lil bit
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Aight check it
Like who wants to be a millionaire, im endin your life lines// Send bullets through your mouth and head so your brain and jaw combine// You spit gay shit like your eatin your boyfriends feces, physically// Manslaughter is my middle name the way im killin these emcees lyrically// Gettin "hard" and ejaculatin is the only "way" you beat tough dick// Ill give you a 3rd degree burn from my "heat" to your face in "Miami" trick// This nigga has no skills like he misplaced his talent, its gone// DW dickrides so much when they pull out it has to be surgically withdrawn// "Traces" of blood in puddles like unrehearsed Red Cross "magic" shows// Punches leave you "lazy eyed" like nerve cells on sick days like retired hoes// Explanations: Tim Hardway played for the Atlanta Heat Tracy (traces) McGrady is lazy eyed and plays or the magic |
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aight ima say dw takes this, heres my breakdown......
structure-tie flow-tie vocab-dw wordplay-dw punches-dw personals-dw overall-dw props to the both of ya, but ima say dw takes this. yo if u have the time can u hit this up wit an honest vote? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84864 itd be much appreciated. peace....... |
this was a sik battle ya'll came wit sum creative stuff.
Dw ya had sum witts. the 5th and 6th bar was comedy and had a great visual. the final bar had sum witts wit it too. i thought ya lacked sturcture though. ya verse did seem kinda rushed. Gb ya verse was straight no real flaws. i thought explainin ya witts was kinda funny, but ya punches did hitt hard and ya flow as solid. Good Stuff vote = GB22 quote: This nigga has no skills like he misplaced his talent, its gone// DW dickrides so much when they pull out it has to be surgically withdrawn// ^ kinda played, but funny none the less |
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Gb ya verse was straight no real flaws. i thought explainin ya witts was kinda funny, but ya punches did hitt hard and ya flow as solid. Good Stuff
vote = GB2 This nigga has no skills like he misplaced his talent, its gone// DW dickrides so much when they pull out it has to be surgically withdrawn/ the other kid had veeeeery played lines......vote to gb |
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I think GB got dis with harder hitting punches, the ejaculating line is played out tho
and his flow was a bit choppy but the last 2 bars got my vote, on da real Vote = GB2 hit this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84006 |
aight thanks for votin man
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I'm votin GB22 took this just because his punches hit home a lot harder. Everythin else in the battle was a tie. Good battle
Peace!!! p.s. It still aint lettin me vote so can somebody else put my vote in for GB22 I Am Not Pollin This Vote... Because It Is A Crappy Explanation... And Also Because He Says He STILL Can't Poll Vote... So That Leads Me To Believe This Is An Alias Of Somebody Who Already Voted. -Axe |
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