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Some quick skatter brained shit.......
i'll be droppin more polished ryhms later...
this juss a sample of my words......


Wach me free 'While..Still..Holdin..Flow' with 'Four..Sylabol..Multies'//
Identity born from the 'Miles..Spill-en..Chrome' with dome shots on plot to 'Pour..Intestinole..Filleens'//
'Style..Kill-ens..Before' the whole store-y is put 'Forth' with 'Unbareable..Cutteens'//
'Mentality..Rides..Apon..Pholosophies' kurupteed by 'Realities..Truth'//
Spew 'Fatalties..Awide..Across..Countries' vacinities influincing the 'Communities..Youth'//
To 'Bloom..Into' devilish 'Ways..Instead..Of..Athourities..Praise'//
Selling this haze from 'Room..To..Room' druggin lifes muse to 'Play..Ahead..Of..Infinities..Gates'//
I'm the 'Equilibrium..To..All..That..Is..Great'. filling young 'Minds..With..All..Of..This..Hate'//
I'm the deaths 'Sequal-Living-Again..To..Fall-Ow..The..State' of mind were there isa place of 'Time..To..Shall..Over..Loves..Taste'//

yo the flow was there but not really that strong....
i liked it though...keep droppin...
..peace..

Yeah...this was ok...you should try to make your lines the same length though..flow was ok, needs some work...vocab was alright could be up'd..multies were ok...add some internals to make it flow better..but it was a ok drop...keep at it..and keep dropping.

and if you could leave some feedback..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84048