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Otherwordz 10-08-03 05:00 AM

What I See...(ft. ~RuthLess~)
 
~RuthLess~

In my twisted mind I see stealth bombing planes and battle ships/
I see evil take hold, it has a grasp on the people who begin to bring forth the apocolypse/
there's an old man dressed as a massiah repeating the same line on the streets, "the end is coming."/
he knows as well as you do he speaks the truth but he is confused to why no one is in panic, no one is running/
I see a barron wasteland of bodies, remains from a war that is on its way/
not so far now however not soon enough to begin numbering any of our children's days/
to others this theory is mysterious mental incryptions.
I know this is the truth but I am with feeling on it like the old man who prays it's Nonficticious/
to be without fear is to be at your Worst/
I with hold all my inconquerable fears except the one that haunts most and that's death/

King of Thievez

I see hatred and pain on the earth...life liquid escapez from ya veinz to the dirt...
wordz of hate escape from ya brain cause you cursed...y'all were raised with hate in ya brain from ya birth...
I take a look at the suffering and how some killaz bledgeon with love...
seditive drugz...are spread as I look down from the heavenz above...
ghetto'z with thugz...streets filled with metal from slugz...
y'all are forgettin' the hugz...as you stand there holding a weapon in glovez...
I see an old man prayin' for death...as payment of debt...
payin' respect to his dead son while he'z layin' in bed...
I see a woman livin' on the streets with infants...you need to listen...
I see killaz from the streets imprisoned...released as hitmen...
I see crumblin' buildingz...crying motherz running with children...
gunz are for killin'...those who are considered under fullfillin'...
I watch the cycle of life as it endz...and then I write with a pen...
the death cycle beginz... sometimez after 25 to life in the pen...
I seen as wordz spoke from rappaz...caused toasterz to blow em backwordz...
stolen jackets...murder so gruesome the pastor gotta close the casket...
Jew'z throwin' stonez at Catholics...causing Hindu'z, Buddists, Muslimz, and Christianz to hate...
the the planets end is at stake...and when armageddon is finished I can say that this was ya fate...

cutastraphe 10-08-03 05:08 AM

hmm nice little piece here i was feelin king of thievez flow more and the concepts was tight. Ruthless ya flow culd be better but ya rhymes were good for what they were sayin and meanin sum good wrdplay too. kingz mutlis' and wrdplay were off the hook i culd be feelin this as an audio no doubt nice spits ya too------one

WORD~PERFECT 10-08-03 05:12 AM

ruthless your verse was to short....lol
####you come short ms ruth must be so disapointed######

#######by the way the end is coming behold your messiah####

your verse was well written fell off beat to me but was a great read none the less...shrink bars down a lil other then that real good.

KING you came as usual nothing seperated this from your others really but was a hot ass verse....
(the only thing you lack is talent....lol)

Otherwordz 10-08-03 05:31 AM

^^^the only thing you about to lack is a crew...;)...j/k...I love you WORD...you my fuckin' twin...and thanks for the feed cut...

Edicius 10-08-03 10:17 AM

This was a real Kaas! piece, ....nice

Both came well , on vocab , ....and on concept it was kinda nice, ......this was a good drop :)

Hit some of mine up

^Preciated

~RuThLEss~ 10-08-03 10:37 AM

LOL yea i became a lil rusty......KING nice shit

uppun

Edicius 10-08-03 10:41 AM

jij blind return fav, lol.....dankje

~RuThLEss~ 10-08-03 10:43 AM

lol kanker flikker

Edicius 10-08-03 10:48 AM

wat jij boos , ......

Tering hond :p lol^

Otherwordz 10-08-03 02:34 PM

<------not Dutch...but I smoke Dutchez...preferably vanilla or green leaf....but the cogniac onez are good too...now...let's start speakin' Spanish...;)

KingOfKings 10-08-03 02:50 PM

its okay, Ruthless flow was off, KingoFTheives flow was on point, his verse was better (no hate on Ruth)

keep droppin em

1

Otherwordz 10-08-03 05:11 PM

^^^thanks for the feedback...still uppin'...

Otherwordz 10-09-03 12:41 AM

uppin'...

Otherwordz 10-09-03 01:58 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by King of Thievez
uppin'...


^^^yup...

~RuThLEss~ 10-09-03 10:20 AM

Yea Uppun and since when u joined Diamonds???


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