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LM 10-08-03 07:04 AM

LM vs Fatal D
 
Quick six lines,
No d/r and all that stuff,
No time limit but don't take ages,
All votes must be explained

LM 10-08-03 07:11 AM

Good luck....
I'm droppin first so here it is....

So you think your a dope MC?/
Don't kid yourself, you cant string two words together effectively/
You need to get your ass in the W.E.C hastily/
And re-pay visits frequently/
Take time to elavate your skills drastically/
Then maybe they'll be a point of you battlin me/.


Peace!!!!!

LM 10-08-03 07:41 AM

I know i said no time limit but try not to take the piss. Hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LM 10-08-03 08:39 AM

It dont look like this little herb is gonna show up so maybe i should just get the win coz he's a no show. He accepted my call aswell the cheeky little bastard

Fatal D 10-08-03 09:10 PM

yo
im checkin in
sorry about the delay ive been busy at the minute
words out that you bin dissing me sayiin im a no show
i realize where you coming from but dere aint no reason to take it up wid the mods cus im late
...mentionin my name n shit
man you need some patients
any way no hard feelings cus i wud be pretty pissed if i were you
.......D

Fatal D 10-08-03 09:11 PM

yo im a drop in a minute
yo offline at the minute so when you come back online then well start uppin fo votes

Fatal D 10-08-03 09:35 PM

Yo listen up LM, wheres the O P Q//
Its only taken me one line, to destroy and make fun of you//
I aint the herb, you are, ill roll you up and toke you//
throw in some of my own shit, and jus a whiff of it will choke you//
Leave you standing there with cotton mouth, impossible to spit//
You realise now afta i done won, YOU CAN'T HANDLE MY SHIT!!//

CasalenA 10-08-03 09:49 PM

LOLOL funny battle

This musta been a real blind spit

Anyway Vote-Fatal

He had like 1 punchline and the other dude had nun, weird battle and it was hard to come to a descision but i chose Fatal

Fatal when u see this hit this up wit an honest one ok man

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84295

Fatal D 10-08-03 09:50 PM

uppin fo votes............................................. ..............
or coments or some shit
thnx
........................D

Fatal D 10-08-03 10:11 PM

.................yo can i get some votes or some feedback in here plz
........thnx
......................D

KingOfKings 10-08-03 10:13 PM

wow, wiieerd battle, but i'd say fatal got this tho, verse better than the other's

1

Vote = Fatal

peep ma sig

C_Drama 10-08-03 10:18 PM

both is in need of serious elevation

but i give this to Fatal for da better overall verse, not much can be said cuz both verse lacked in a lot of areas

VOte =Fatal

hit these battles up

Bionicle VS C-Drama
Lyrical Cyanide VS C-Drama

Fatal D 10-08-03 10:27 PM

thnx for the feed back i no my verse could be improved but it was because his rule was 6 lines and you cant really do much in 6 lines
thts why this battle is so weird
thnx fo all the coments tho
appreciated .................D

Emerge 10-08-03 10:33 PM

weak battle

fatal wins

flow-tie..only 6 lines
vocab-tie
personals-none
wordplay-fatal
punches-fatal
overal-fatal

Fatal D 10-08-03 10:40 PM

thnx fo all the feed back really apreaciate it
still looking fo any more coments or votes thanx
................D


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