rookie vs lib
 

yo man post bk then i will battle

I'm here,

8 lines,
usual othr rules...

when your ready dawg....
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yo lib im gunna murder u in this battle ur gunna loose,
i will walk all over u it will b like havin a fuckin cruise,
yo lib u must b fuckin gay,
cos who is a bloke n doesnt av a bride bt a fioncé,
dnt gt me wrong man i aint homophobic,
its jst i dnt think a gay is supposed 2 rap their supposed 2 suck another mans dick,
so y dnt u gt da fuck off rap battles and go and suck off a bloke,
im outa here man watch dis kid make a fool of himself cos hes a fuckin joke,

common lib lets here u man
lets c wat u av gt and lets get sum votes on .................................................. .....pz

rply then lib hurry up................................................ ..............................pz

Calm down...fuck...
anyways, your about to be murked

Ill leave rookie in Mad Hopes w/ this battle. . your chances are Un-certain //
Yuh Ass is In a Bad Position like ‘Prison Showers’ with out Walls-or-Curtains //
I deliver hurtins bitch, So just Say Ouch when I Stick Jabs Swift //
Coz, Ill leave you Torn-n-Forgotten like ‘Christmas Wrappings’ on Good Gifts //
This fake thug Attempting to Battle the God Like you’re the Top of the Mob //
Examine How Pleazure Trips Like ‘Blind Seniors’ runnin over Seeing eye Dogs //
I dint birth yuh Style, But ‘Sonning you off it’ like you were in a busted Condom //
As long as your past Revolves around Penis. . . You probably don’t See a Problem.......

Done...Votez plz

Lib won this easily..............punches flow etc much better.........................

breakdown of vote:

FloW:lib
Structure:lib
Punches:lib

hit this up....................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83990

peace

Up.

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i dont think i should have to explain this becuz it was a merking but i will any way
punches-lib
metaphors-lib
flow-lib
vocab-lib
personals-rook
overall-lib

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83083
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=severe+lyrics
^^can I get some fair votes on them^^

^Thanx, yes i'll check your shit

uppin,
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definatley lib, no doupt about it, just better all round.....

flow didnt seem right in rook's.

good battle anyway.

lib all the way in this battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

flow=lib
structure=lib
punches=lib
overall=lib

vote=lib!!!!!!!!!!!!