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KnightShade 10-08-03 05:36 PM

-Untitled-
 
I'm going to cordinate the destruction of rival factions cordinates.
Rupture spleens and torture the unfortunate subordinates.
Un-decoding wordplay, can't decypher my custom signature.
Make light of your dominant fixtures and paint vivid pictures of
pinpoint personification in my scriptures.
Implant remote bombs in the form of interest.
Even infants grow up and
lost ignorance when my spit is this insistent.
Arrogance is ignorance, that's why the homeless is modest.
You verbalist are beneath me you should pay me homage.
The ability to burn lyricists and tread water at any rate.
So lethal that it's illegal for me to conceive and inpregnate.
Functions are defunct, I'll regulate your body weight.
Understand on contact, it's common knowledge you're dead when your pupils don't dilate.
Catastrophic disaster, clostrophic mc's brain matter
shatter when trapped in wall plaster.
Kinetic energy rupture your intestine,
as your liver dissolve and divide your bladder.
Linguistic skillz, ballistic tips of metaphors will kill.
Effects of poison, cause body openings and pores to fill.
Gallons of bodily fluid will spill as the after effect of violence.
Automatically rip you like talons, trample you with stallions as
they hammer your vocal cord and you die in silence.
Contaminate your username, abuse your frame.
Yet and still, the only time you really move drugs is when you crippled and using a cane...

KnightShade 10-08-03 06:15 PM

^

Chrit 10-08-03 06:17 PM

Nice...

Just random type shit...
Not a deep topic or anything

But ryhme scheme was nice...
Internals were there...

Good shit

Dimez 10-08-03 06:20 PM

Good sence of vocabulary, your very intelligent!

i enjoyed reading it ....

fav lines:

The ability to burn lyricists and tread water at any rate.
So lethal that it's illegal for me to conceive and inpregnate.
Functions are defunct, I'll regulate your body weight.
^

keep it commin!

KnightShade 10-08-03 06:24 PM

thanks for the feedback.

KnightShade 10-08-03 09:26 PM

^

self 10-08-03 11:57 PM

To Lazy To Make A Title?

I'm To Lazy To Read.

KnightShade 10-09-03 09:40 AM

^

-Magnitude 10-09-03 09:59 AM

Not bad man. .
Had some purrty good lines in there, overall a decent peice, I really like the title alot :cool:

KnightShade 10-09-03 11:33 AM

thanks for the feed back.

.::D-Eff3kt::. 10-09-03 11:51 AM

LMAO@Bruklor




.....> Was Pretty Good...Good Word Usage....But They Seemed Forced...Bars Werent Equal.Hence, Flow Went Off.Keep Alive.



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