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ModestlyShi 10-08-03 07:53 PM

structured an worked on...
 
:bored: yea yea.....heres sumthin ive thought on fa more than 5 minutes.............transform.....


...im evil..an my favorite colors purple...wut could i be but a decetacon?...an i luv to bear arms so the blade i keep wit me is my own minicon...but when i need heat who better than megatron...callin out autobots...bring it on...

im a devoted soldier to folow orders not moralizin my task but lettin my soul grow colder what would a machine need wit an angel on his shoulder? i am a member of no army im a dark transformer...

i am a leaderless mecenary and the idea of a murderer with emotion an no guilt is rather scary so the monster of ya nitemares has no striped shirt aint 10 feet tall nor hairy...but i juss mite carry a machete and the top of the basement steps juss mite be bloody...im juss plain evil long past gully...


lmao...if u cant tell i was watchin my favorite cartoon when i wrote this.....

:D

varentao 10-08-03 08:26 PM

Heh. Humurous yet had these emotional undertones. One could see it as a subtle dig at society...violence n false patriotism n all that.

Okay, so it was a bit 'here and there' at times.

But really, it didn't matter. The piece was what it was. And i liked it for what it was.

...resp...

ModestlyShi 10-08-03 09:44 PM

ha! varentao has spoken on my peice...kool!!!! thanx fa the words

Da NFamous 10-08-03 10:36 PM

i agree wit V it remindsd me of an old techniqu most recently brought to my attention by Kanye West, It's a light theme that treads on the thin ice of idiocy but the depth below the surface makes it break the metaphorical ice and drowns you in intelligence, suck on that, 1luv.


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