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ITT: My One True Passion
My One True Passion. .
As a child, Despite my Age, id often Recite through Plays, and dream about performing Live Behind the Mic on a Stage. This Fight for Fame, became a mountain struggle id Hold Higher, as i worked my heart out to gain the leading Roll In The Quoir. Hoping that Either id be respected, & shown True Peers Love, or become noticed, & then fulfill what id Always Dreamed Of. it may not Mean Much to you. . but i cursed out at The Lord when suddenly my voice broke & there was Singing No More. . Just an empty silence Inside, followed as years rolled By and i was only tryna C-Notes by Making Cash in real Life. Id Concealed Lies from my parents, it was really Thanks To This, & now their 'little soldier' had grown addicted to Cancer Sticks. no Plan Was Fixed, it started from curiosity, & Grew Annoying, cant kick the habit, my Mouth's round More Butts than New Employees. smokin Roughly 200 a day, doctor noticed a cough had developed, that required a check up, and possibly Larynx treatments. . The hospitals diagnosis: a form of tumor inside my throat that needed instantly removing, caused from cigarette smoke This isnt a joke i thought silently, worried for my own health doctors stacked on both sides of me, yet nobody to help. thou the operation's succesful, the tumor removed and stings Throat Cancer brought an end to my one true passion, To sing. |
That was sick as hell, Camarac. The wordplay is clever, the structure is solid, the flow is on point and the storyline is excellent. Definitely a good drop. This is one that shouldn't get slept on... :)
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ITT = Insane Topical Tourney
this is my piece for round 2 |
Yo, Cam...
I appreciate the feedback ya gave on my "Game" verse... Thank you. So... Are ya trying ta say this is a true story? Cuz if it is, that's pretty fucked, man. How old are you? For Cancer ta kick in, and for you to smoke 5 packs a day??? You'd have to be as old as me or even older... What gives? Was this fiction or non? Anyway... The drop was great, Cam. Very deep, very expressive with your metas. Nice wordplay that brought tight imagery, but, like I said... Made me picture an old guy like myself. So it kinda threw me. But this is really good, my man... Really good and sad, depressing as shit to have ta face the realization, basically, that ya fucked yourself and your dream. Do me a favor, my man... I dug up the first thing I ever wrote here... Please tell me what you think. Thanks... My first piece here... |
Damn.. you never seem to dissapoint Cam..
Nice piece... Excellent imagery as always.... Good flow, vocab, etc... Nice all around... Peep: Role Models |
^ Duh, nah but this was dope. .
Everything about it was good, flow & imagery, and everything else. You never dissapoint and this was just another dope peice. . BUT where`s ur even lines hoe.. = ) Good work my man. . |
Hahaha, even lines didnt matter to me in this,
it was more a ` i want to show you exactly what happened and how i feel about this` type piece, no fucking around, no frills, just straight to the point i wanted to make. glad you liked. |
I liked this,...the personal aspects, were deep, and it seems like u jus wrote whats on ur mind...and i think that makes it even better than,..with a perfect structure,...and everything , this was real ejoyable...
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dope as fuck man....i dont need to explain..!!!
but...ur vocab was ill...flow...ill....All of it...ill... and where are these killa internals u been braggin bout.....the way u front, u should be able to build damns with ur verses.... im kiddin man.... SICK AS FUCK..!! |
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*Whipes tears from eyes*
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lol
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True...this shit was pretty sick. Your imagry was ill.....vocab was tiight...word play and all that was sick too. Like Born to kill said....this shit true??? Good drop keep it up, 1
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i hate to join that pack but yo that shit was too sick i read one of a couple of ure battles today and wit dis piece i can tell u aint no fluke drop links so i may read ure shit cuz its hella funny and full of epiphanies i wont vote cuz im new to this but i would like to read it nonetheless peace!!!!!!!!!!
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^^^^^^^LMFAO......!!!!
And yeah...Cams got a real problem, he really enjoyes his Fags....AND I CAN PROVE IT...!!!! Love u "PINKNESS".......!!! |
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