Avalon .|v.s|. Bi0niclE
 

.| 12 lines max. |.
.| due 45 mins. from check in |.
.| no crew votes |.
.| 900 post to vote |.
.| or mods |.
.| no freepostin |.
.| D/Q'd if don't make the due time |.

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900 posts to vote..? Neither one of us has 900 posts... together... LMAO... that's funny...


12-5... that's right... Av's wins are always up to date,
While you're still tryin to load your... WIN. 98'...
recyclin whore... sick rhyme never pass this chump,
everything you drops been used... 10 times in the last 2 months...
your fightin with hope, ya might win'd if I choke,
but your still as lethal as james bond... with his license revoked...
no stoppin till this scrub is banned and hatin whoever,
Av'll break the clutch so bad his sex drive'll need public transportation to put it together...
ur horrible lookin... ugly as sin... and kid,
you can't hide from the truth... although the truth wishes ya did...
talk wordplay... see if you can get this herb,
I can fill ya frame with bullets... better than ms word...



and there you have it people...




Bye now...


*waits to see what happens*

(I hit submit reply on accident...)

.| shootin pussies like Avalon, leavin with the rounds vacant |.
.| av loves bein rich!, theres no need to show how this clowns taken |.
.| this nut is butt, but he cant stress enough that merk squad is back |.
.| ya record's lame n Av's wack, cus the online users panel is the only place ur name has impact |.
.| he's still game? I'd say a baller but a pump is somethin he can't simply afford |.
.| nomination? it's a shame this so called legend isn't mentioned in the emcee awards |.
.| but whatever the cause this nimrod who does rim jobs just for net friends |.
.| Av's career is down the mountain side to show this is where his ledge-ends |.
.| Av's 22, ur not black jack! ur secretly a typist what kind of life is that? |.
.| it's a crisis when the only time ur shootin lines is when ur snipin crack |.
.| just to offend ya, u just a herb who tends to be longing the centa |.
.| cus u missed ur chance to blow up durin the embassy bombings in Kenya |.

Umm yeah...

Ave takes this one with better punches period...

Bionicle seemed forced in places

ur horrible lookin... ugly as sin... and kid,
you can't hide from the truth... although the truth wishes ya did...


^^^
Seriously...
That killed it...

Vote Av...

And dont even bitch about me being in Merk...
Everyone thats been here knows... Merk Squad isnt a crew...
Its a profession

.| omfg |.
.| not only am i gonna bitch about u bein in merk |.
.| i'm gonna bitch about u votin 1 mintue after i post |.
.| u don't even deserve to be a mod |.
.| i'm demandin that vote to be removed becus u d/r av |.

No d/r there....

I read his verse right after he dropped it...
Then read yours right after you dropped...

Av came with less played concepts...
Hitting harder with his punches...

If you really want I'll come back and break the shit donw line by line..

.| oh now why'd u go and vote |.
.| i bet chrit just deletes it becus of the rules |.
.| but it's called honesty chrit, learn it |.

Yeah!

I have more than enough posts to vote!
How fuckin special am I?

Breakdown...
Little less than ultra mega, but it'll explain things...

Multi's: Clearly Bionicle
Flow: Real close, but Avalon took this.
Metas: Pretty much a tie here
Wordplay: Ever so slightly to Bionicle
Personals: Bionicle
Complexity: Avalon
Punches: Avalon

And just for kicks...

Humor: Avalon ("truth wishes ya would" was fuckin great!)
Damn! Factor: Avalon
Opening Bar: Avalon
Closing Bar: Avalon

So it be.
Peace

1-0... Bio kids vote doesn't count... no where near 900... Chrit break down ya vote... fa sho...


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actually since you made the thread aren't you dq'd by your own rules..? 45 mins from check in... you told me as soon as you made it... hummmmmmmmmmm...


and I leave the thread now...

i beg to differ with chrit

flow-i rapped both verses to a beat...bionicles fit more...
consistency-bio
humor-av
punches-both
personals-av
wordplay-bio
creativity-bio
complexity-av
structure-both
similies-av
multis-blah not alot from neither
overall-bio

good shit from u both though
just thought bio came harder

.| actually i made it i think on the exact second of the limit |.
.| so no |.
.| i keep my rules |.

thread made 3:08 pm...

verse dropped 4:12 pm...


with a 45 min time limit..?


but nevermind...


and still it's 1-1...

.| i said 45 mins from check-in |.
.| which is after we both checked in |.
.| i looked at your check in time |.
.| i didn't miss it |.
.| another thing is it's actually 2-1 for some reason |.
.| but enough freepostin |.
.| let the votes flow |.