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Doctor J Vs. X-Ecution
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no d.r. no biting no recycling .................................................. ........ WARNING: I WILL BE CHECKING ON WHO POST HERE |
checkin in.............
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i mess up your vital organs and store them for an organ shortage/
I'll give your dick to a constipated asian, they're used to short-shit!/ i'll Leave u Scorched-Bro, Try-N-Win-it, i'll Leave u Fried-N-Shredded/ this kid Is Pathetic, Wit "Less Flavor" Than a Person Thats Diabetic/ A Bomb-Threat Created-and-Demonstrated For Mind-Stress/ Wit this bitch's Back Against The Wall Like a Spined-Chest/ Pull some Alfred hitchcock shit, so It'll be HARD WHEN PAIN FLOCKS/ I'm sure everyone thinks of u like the club scene in Iceland BARS JUST AINT HOT/ My lyrics like Bustin' a 9 I got you Duckin' the rhyme/ Punch through the Vest on your chest till your Sternum touches your SPINE!/ |
I’m A Rack-Up-Dis-Kid, "He Claim He Freestyle" ‘Cuz-Homos-Good-Wit-Fashion-Tips'/
Best Relax-Ur-Hips! "U Must Exercise Ya Butt Cheeks "Tha-Way-Ur-Ass-Gets-'Ripped'// Check-It-Kid, My Verbal Techs-Will-Spit And Land Hard Punches Til I’ve Wrecked-My-Fists/ And I’m A Specialist, Cuz I'll Deck-This-Bitch Until He's Connected Only By His Neck-And-Dick// I Infected-Sick And Injected-Ticks To Prove Ya Can’t Flow Wit Ya Neglected-Clique/ So I’m Gonna Project-A-Diss With So Many Intoxicated Flows, That It'll Leave U Left-In-Piss// Without Lookin At Cha Verse-I’ll-Disperse-Words That’ll Leave U Emotionally Hurtin/ If Words Hurt Then Mine Will Disintegrate Ur Body So U Can Do Some Soul Searchin// X I'll Fill Anthrax In A Syringe, And Stab The Needle In Ur Optical Lens, Then U’ll See Death/ Den I’ll Splatter Yo Lungs On Your Veins So Ur Illiterate Ass Can Bleed Breath// |
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punches=doc sustaiment=doc flow=tie metas=doc origanality=x vocab=x creativity=doc overall=doc........jus def had harder punches.thats all....nice battle peeps hit this up......... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82725 |
.|X took this|.
.|i give it to Doctor J for the minor wordplay|. .|n consistency of flow|. .|but X took this punch wise as usual|. .|drop a fair one here|. .| http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=84443 |. .|i can't poll cus i'm at a friend house|. .|i'll poll when i get home though|. |
Thanx for da vote
uppin 4 votes(1) .................................................. .................................................. ..... (1-0) |
personally i thin x-ecution got dis!!!!!!
flow=X-Ecution structure=X-Ecution rythem=doctor J word play=tie punches X-Ecution overall=X-Ecution vote= X-Ecution yo hit this up tell me what cha think vote for witch ever one ya want on dis but i'll tell ya's this pine-cone resign'd |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9665#post829665
sorry thats supose to be in there lol my fault and for got to vote. but i told ya who i vote for |
this match was even all the way except for the punches.....
doctor J gets my vote cuz his punches were harder...good shit by the both though... GameTime... |
Thats nice we should have said only people wit under 500 post can vote cuz theres 2 many herbz who look at cha stats and vote on dat
anyways 1-1 uppin 4 votes(2) yo x check out i.r. bout cha friend bionicle |
^ bullshyt vote give a better explination..........if not ima get that removed im not acceptin no bs votexs.........1
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i meant over 500 post uppin i guess(3) |
yea kid vote like dis for example -Brixton- post so post again
explain more though thats sumtin thing they have to learn x uppin for votes(4) |
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