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[Wk2] Micatic vs Calda Merda
Verses Due: Thursday October 16th Voting Ends: Sunday the 18th Topic: Freeze In Time |
This is My check in....Nice Topic...could be a dope battle if done right...good luck...........1
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..The Chance To Change It.. .. The Answers .. .. His Thought .. He Could Get His Life In Focus, His Wife To Know This.. Hear The Right Voices.. Only If.. Time Was Frozen.. He Wished He Could See His Life The Way He En-Visioned It – Yet It’s the Simplistic Shit That Makes All The Differences – You Ask Yourselves The “What Ifs’’ And “If That’s” – “What If So n’ So Didn’t Think Or Didn’t Do That ?” – Back To Back.. You Hear The Same Pressed Lessons – Wished He Could Turn Back To Answer The Following Questions.. – What If Kennedy Never Got Shot, Would He Still Live In Infamy? – If Beethoven Wasn’t Deaf, Would He Still Be Inspired By His Symphonies? – If The Planes Malfunctioned, Would Iraq N’ America Still Be Fightin?.. If The Bomb Never Ignited, Would Timothy McVeigh Still Be Indicted?.. If Columbine Wasn’t The First School, Would Their Still Be Violence?.. If Their Never Was A WWII, Would America N’ Japan Still Be Allianced?.. If Color Wasn’t Segregated, Would Black People Still Be Hated?.. If KKK Never Birthed, Would Martin Luther King N’ Rosa Parks Be Out-Dated? – If Pac N’ Big Were Never Shot, Would Hip Hop Still Be So Strongly Influencial? – If A Pencis Wasn’t So Essential.. Would Their Be Hype For Potential ? - If He Didn’t Think Of All The “Ifs” Would He Have A Happier Life ? – If He Could Think Of All The “Ifs”.. How Many “ifs” Would He Write? – He Got The Chance To Get His Life In Focus.. His Wife To Know This.. Personally Hear The Right Voices, He Was Back.. When Time Was Frozen.. He Stopped The Bullet, From Reachin Kennedy.. He Served His Term – And He Learned.. That His Infamous Speeches Were Still In Textual Words – The Planes Never Hit, Which Was Praised And Immune To See – Yet In All Of Its Goodness, America Was Still Far From Unity – McVeigh Never Found Out, His Crimes Left Silent – Columbine Never Shot Up, Therefore Stopping District Violence – WWII Never Started.. Leaving Peace Good N’ Un-Foiled – Soiled, Yet He Never Knew The Hate Of Inner Turmoil – Stopped Color Discrimination, The King’s Speech Never Heard – KKK Never Formed, But Still Felt For Freedom They Thought They Deserved – Their Was No Heurse.. For Biggie Or Tupac’s Deaths – Rap Stayed w/ Whats Their n’ Never Ventured To Whats Next – He Smiled, Never Thought Of Problems.. Just Opptomistic – Thought He Made Everything Right.. Answered All Of His Ifs Listed – Time Came Back.. After His Self Re-Adjustments Of Differences – But Everything Wasn’t Right.. Not The Way He En-Visioned It – Something Was Missin.. He Listened, N’ Looked Around – His Home Town, Was To Say The Least….. Alone Now – What Had Happened? What Did He Do.. What In The Hell ? – Rubble Of Buildings.. Acid Fumes Filled His Smell – Bombs And Gases, He Thought He Stopped The Threat – Japanese Flags All Around.. Guess They Had To At Sum Set – And The Sun Set, Was Nothing Less Than Faded Light – Remembered His Life.. Had To Get To His Loving Wife – Found Her, She Was Re-Married.. Now What Has Happened – Then Remembered Looking.. Then His Face Saddened – His Father Met A Nurse During A Battle In World War Two – That Was His Mother, But He Was Too Power Stricken w/o Clue – If He Never Went Back In Time Would He Be So Torn ? – If He Didn’t “If” Himself So Much.. He Would Have Still Been Born – He Got The Chance To Get His Life In Focus.. His Wife To Know This.. Hear The Right Voices, But Now He’s Stuck.. Somewhere Where Time Is Frozen |
Not Sure On Bar Length..
So If Thats Over.. My Bad Just Fell Into The Topic I Guess |
nyce drop playboy....nyce twist at tha end, i liked all of tha multi's, hopefully this otha kat shows......once again, well done.........stay real, peace, 1
i'm droppin soon peep my ish |
Remember The Greats,Or Let Ur Family Inhold Ur Fate,Like Theyve Chozen Ur Life
But Dont Allways Trust Family,Cuz They Allmost Put Ted Williams Frozen In Time Brokein In Minds,And Freeze Time As We Take Pictures Of Trends Would We Remember Life Or Death,Or Is It Just Beging To End Can U Freeze Time And Awake In New Places,Or Pick Ur Generations Of People Or Can U Freeze Special Moments From When Tru Men Were Saying Whats Meanful I Quote Martin Luthar King,I Belive In A Day Were We Live Togther,Where Were Free I Would Now Wonder Today,If He Had His Chance Frozen In Time,Would He Still Dream Would There Still Be That Team,That Held Dynisteys, Rememberd As The Greatest As We Sit In Amazment,Of The Past..Long Ago From What Happend,Befor Our Ages And If We Could Just Catch A Quick Glimps Of The Diffrence From Then N Now We Wouldnt Have To Freeze Time,To Wonder Of Our Fathers History Of When N How If Enstine Was Frozen In Time,Would Time Be A Factor To Life If Life Freezes All Togther In Time,Would U Life End Faster Than Mine Attackers In Time,Threw World War 1..and World War 2 Choices Were Chozen N Made What Makes Me Wonder..If all things Would Be Better If They Were Frozen For Days Just a Few More,And Maby Things Might Have Changed,N Click For Friend ship IF Killing,Or Lieing,Or Sinning Was Frozen Would There Still Be Amendments In Sealed Ice...Would U Be Able To Stay Alive Till A Cures Relinkwished If They Froze J.F.K...would he still be Alive After HIs Tearm Finished These Things I Wonder,And Consume Togher n Are Blowin My Mind And Why Cant Life Take A Brake..N just All Of Life Be Frozen in Time |
Micatic aka Romoulos You Came Half Assed In This One.
I was Actually Impressed By Calda Merda's Verse For Coming Out Of Nowhere, Was Not That Strong Of A Verse, But Had Goo Structure And Multies And Shit. Vote: Calda Merda |
Calda Merda fucking killed this.
I enjoyed his verse thoroughly, it had a great story, and I really really liked the whole "what if" steez. You flow was really good. The pac and biggie shit was played though. Micatic-This was okay, you could have done better, but Calda just killed you. Your flow was off, very little wordplay, and not many original ideas. You need to come full on against a verse like that. vote-Calda Merda |
Calda Merda...came strong i really can see the effort made in this piece..although i did think you tried a bit to hard to put meaning within each "if" line..still it was exicuted well. as for Romulus i really knew by the first couple lines that you lost this one....but all in all it had its moments nice job to the both of you....
-1- vote=Calda Merda |
Calda Merda wins.
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