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Mr.Christensen 10-10-03 01:22 PM

TR and BROOKLYN - Hate Me
 
Newbie 1: The Realist is a MOD?
Newbie 2: He must give good head... You heard about Brook
Newbie 1: He's overrated like hell
Newbie 2: He's a MOD too


**~SynText~**
These cats catch drama then hold peace to a minimal...
They part human...part wanted...part sick individuals...
They morbidly ecstatic plastic wrapping cats in caskets...
Its drastic how two cats can stir a whole board in static...

BROOKLYN
Oh I Had Battles, Opponents Broke Rules And I Lost
Why Toss The Fault On Me? Pennies For Thoughts But My Cost
Certain Mods Don't Deserve Their Position, My Ambitions?
I Don't Wanna State No Names But This City Plans Submission
Best Power Is To Delete, Place Ban Threats But Who's Devoured?
Screw You Cowards, I Could Flow More Dirt On Ya Names Than School Showers
Its Finished & Over, All Who Hate Me Can Go to Hell, Who Cares?
By My Wrath & Title I Withhold No One Is Spared!!!


The Realist
I don’t give a fuck about you, play that into translation
Up in arms about me, no matter I live in moderation
Why hate me it didn’t have to be, everything I say is in reality
Is it cause I rapidly advocate how you are affected by gravity
I do my job systematically, fuck you, let the freepost begin
Talk trash like your trying to get rid of them, your literally littering
Won’t see me disabled cause I’m so stable I’m labeled Ritalin
Like Jabber I'm going in the books, and so far that’s just for hooks
This site is my online wife, we do our best and try and live with luck
Yall trying to knife my half life, post what you think …Like we gives a fuck?

-Magnitude 10-10-03 01:40 PM

Lmao. .
Revenge of the hated mods, wasnt bad peice, I mean it was funny in my eyes because alot of mods do hate you 2. .
Where the hell did syntext come into this though, lmao, not bad not bad, this was funny to me, but I know how you feel . .

FaLLeN 10-10-03 02:10 PM

nice piece fo show.... i guess when ur h8ed u gotta let peeps know how u feel. could tell u guys had that flowin with lots of emotion, and u had very nice structure and vocab.

i give b+ :P (cause im sure u could right betta)

Respect,
pz

e.coli 10-10-03 02:14 PM

very nice piece nigga. vocab, structure, wordplay, and metas were all on point nigga. i like how you said what was on yo mind

nice drop nigga

This site is my online wife, we do our best and try and live with luck
Yall trying to knife my half life, post what you think …Like we gives a fuck?

^^^this was my favorite line

holla at yo boi
~1~

Menik 10-10-03 02:29 PM

Yeah i agree...this was a real good piece....it flowed very nice through out it as i read it...Vocab from both were real good i thought...structure was real good as well...metas were good...and i like the way you both ended your verses...good piece...and keep dropping.

Dirty Sally 10-10-03 02:40 PM

i liked it, that was raw emotion right there. The structure was good, the vocab is excellent and it had a nice flow to it. You guys had the multies in there all in all it was a good drop.

/:Ayura:\ 10-10-03 02:55 PM

Short, but damn that was ill.

Quote:
Oh I Had Battles, Opponents Broke Rules And I Lost
Why Toss The Fault On Me? Pennies For Thoughts But My Cost


very creative. liked that line alot and showed talent

Quote:
do my job systematically, fuck you, let the freepost begin
Talk trash like your trying to get rid of them, your literally littering


wow, sick line, and it something differant to the real world. this is internet shit *yea* lol . liked the way you smoothly related your lines to freeposting and the windows trash can.

Keep collaberating, you two make a great pair

Born To Kill 10-10-03 03:21 PM

My two motherfuckers...

Maybe now ya'll can feel me.

Hated on cuz ya record shows alot of wins?

I'll be dammned!

Hated on cuz peeps act like ya didn't earn them wins?

Really, what's that like?

You beat a bunch of newbs, none of em were shit!

Damn, that sounds familiar...

And finally...

Ya catch hate for getting mod spots...

Well, don't know about that...
But how's being hated on just cuz ya 34?


I feel ya pain
(In my best Clinton voice)

The verse flowed well and had a tight message.
I think about 3-4 of my Open Mics were alot like this.
Venting.
Get off my ass type of rhymes.
I ain't gonna go into who had the better verse...
Just good wordplay, metas, and vocab from both.

Nice piece.
Good bitch session.

gotaloveforrap 10-10-03 04:55 PM

i was definetely feelin that, both verses were off the hook, the flow was on target, the vocab and wordplay were great, the topic was kool, and the realists closer was a killer, props to both of ya, that was great shit.

peace......

JohnnyWatts 10-10-03 05:41 PM

wow nice junk

Am At Cha 10-10-03 07:09 PM

uppin

Da_Renegade 10-10-03 07:20 PM

They morbidly ecstatic plastic wrapping cats in caskets...
Its drastic how two cats can stir a whole board in static...

those 2 lines was sick, damn

Brook started off iightish but got nice at this point

Best Power Is To Delete, Place Ban Threats But Who's Devoured?
Screw You Cowards, I Could Flow More Dirt On Ya Names Than School Showers
Its Finished & Over, All Who Hate Me Can Go to Hell, Who Cares?
By My Wrath & Title I Withhold No One Is Spared!!!


The realist shit was good as well too

ncie drop from both

8/10

.existance. 10-10-03 08:29 PM

do my job systematically, fuck you, let the freepost begin
Talk trash like your trying to get rid of them, your literally littering

^^^ Nice Ish . . .
You Had Nice Verses But I Wasnt Really Feelin Brooklyn's Verse, He Could Have Done Better . . . The Realist Had The Best Verse I Believe . . .

Mr.Christensen 10-11-03 12:38 AM

1 up
4 left

thanx alot all of you, were happy that you understand what we were saying

Syn was in this cause i needed a 4 line opener... and i have to give credit where credit is due

**~SynText~** 10-11-03 01:11 AM

no doubt this shit was sickness hahahahahahahah i love it holmes brook and realist killin it


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