The-Marvel-Arm Vs Revlon
 

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usual votin rulez
no d/r etc....
no crew or hata votes....

spit now you got half an hour....

im sorry......but im goin to merk u..............
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Yo Yo

Revlon revolves like gun barrells not protected by teflon he gets shot,
His lines aint white like street margins he dont know if he's straight or not.
Im thinking its cruel to pick on him seeing as he's deaf dumb and blind,
Plus he's obviously blank with his thoughts cuz im seeing right through his mind.
His hits hit like bitches, no power behind his weak ass thrusts,
He's in two minds like skitzophrenics he doesnt know which one of him he can trust.
Im marking you down in price cuz your gonna be 2nd stock in this drop,
Cuz im the rhyme reaper and now is the time you about to get the chop.
Your lines are blunt no way to your sharpe so wheres the point,
Im thinking clearly as I win where as your hazed from my joint.

There you go!!!!!!!

the-marvel-arm........


yo this kids wak...Ima'Spot'em such a lead u'd think he's part'Leapord-
forget em other Kats dawg....Jus say u front a up-to-date Record-('04/0-4)

Effin Loser..I aint eve gonna break my christian dialect to disect-
mic'chek...this kids 138 posts ahead an i still lead in poll elect-

Wanna use ya comic book status? for RB.com? Bro, thats Fag-
56k strait lagged u frontin like a femcee wit out a pad on the rag-

I could leave it at that....but i aint.....

Dis kids a'Dutch'Boy'...26...way coated and over his'Prime'-
Im poppin pill's of Viagra jus tryna getta Rise outta ya lines-

I don't see it, ya spit gone...A balemic's hidden secret-
Like i said before...ya aint worth a Swear'..no need to Bleap It'-

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aiiyo if i culd vote, this is how i would break it down

opener:tie
closer:tie
wordplay:revlon
punches:tie
personals:revlon
structure:revlon
enjoyed most:tie
overall:revlon


plz return the favor wit a fair vote, or criticism
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85357