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Smoken My Life Away(Remix)
ME and YungSwoop Collab-petty good track...
The Remix to Swoops Orig. version... Leave Ya Feed Back Swoop-Verse 1 Swoop-Hook Rated-R-Verse 2 Swoop-Hook Smoken My Life Away(Remix) http://www.soundclick.com/auidorealm ^Check It..I Redid My Verse..So I Put More Emotion Into THis..What Do u All think Now.. |
this song was off the hook...i was lovin the beat...the hook was tight...i kept playin this shit over and over...you were def on sum shit...i'd give this a 8.5/10
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the beat was ill as fuck..........nice shit from both of you...this was just all around dope as fuck...good work guys
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first cat was sick as hell......
i was feelin that hsit.............. second cat needs more emotion.... hook was on point and catchy....... nice drop........ |
thanks for all the feedback...yeah Swoops the First Guy and im the Second...but the diffrence is Hes be doing this Longer Than me...Ive Been Doin audio For like 2 and aHalf weeks....so lol..Theres ur Awnser...im Still New...but Yeah Thanks For the Feedback...but keep upin on some Thoughts.....about This Track
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this joint is pretty tight... I can't front. beat is nice, flows is nice, ya on point. this is a jump off 4real.
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Tight piece................
Was feelin both verses Tight beat Nice Collab |
Nice song...beat was aight, but the lyrics was on-point and the hook was awesome...good message on the song...YungSwoops...straight fire...Rated-R, just gotta work on rapping with emotion...you kinda sound laid back, but tight track...
8/10 |
likin' the beat, it's kinda the same as "Conditioner"->Wu tang--> like melody wise, had that bounce 2 it... swoop comes with his usual smooth flow an' delivery, rated-r had a smooth flow, but needs more emotion, sounded like he was readin' it... i mean i read mine but after practicin' the flow for a while so emotion comes stronger.. good track tho, i liked the hook it was catchy.. 1
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Work on your mic presence dawg. You need to spit that shit, dont just read it or speak it. Keep doing your thing though.
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Aight thanks For All The Feed Back...ILL make Shure To Put More Effot n Emotion in To The NExt Drop We do....
keep dropin the Feed Back... ohh yea...and keep ur eye out..cuz later Me n Swoop Gonna Drop Another Track..and Im Bout To Drop One Wid me n Pair a dyce..n Devestation...aight ...keep on tha look out...holla |
good shit, really enjoyed the piece,in fact still listenin to it now, ILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yung Swoop is ill as fuck, really enjoyed his verse 9/10 ill joint................................ Hity this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=p.stylez |
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