gbacd vs yog dogg
aight homies, heres ur battle
10 lines max no crew votes no biting no feeding no dickriding verses will be due 45 min after check in good luck to both of u |
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okay check it...
i will be the first to post on this battle, i will crash the mic, make yo brains rattle/ this battle was over before i checked in, we aint kin, i am the king, where the fuck have u been?/ i thought i told u dawg that u had no chance, i saw it from the begginin, even though it was just a glance/ u a newb, why u wanna battle, u talk big fo such a small dick, damn i would fight but i'd hit u so quick, u would be left sick/ so to win this battle u better spit very well and steady, lets get this over with so i can win tell me when ur ready/ |
iz like, I'm caucasian, most rap is tasteless
I'm speechless, don't know their language All I know is I'm not a gangsta G (you know) I am just a white guy who plays the keys Love Journey's song "Don't Stop Believin" Led Zeppelin's "Stairway to Heaven" Listen to rap, and you need to give me the reasons Animal House, Byrds I'm feelin I'm deceivin that rap music cheese, just tease it I won't be able to rap at 34, and rappin wit is such a bore |
that was pretty good gbacd but hey the concept of rap "battling" is to aim ur insults at me. and i saw none. it was like a short song
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okay Uppin in her............................................... .................................................. .............................................
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aight, both of u need to elevate, but heres my breakdown....
structure-tie flow-yog vocab-gbacd wordplay-tie punches-yog personals-tie overall-yog_dogg props to the both of ya, but ima give this to yog_dogg peace....... |
k thanks hey still uppin in her............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ........
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some elevation is needed by both sides. overall this was a pretty whack battle but i got to give the edge to yog-dog his punches are what won this for him.
my vote=yog-dog |
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I can't poll vote...but yog_dog got this...the other kid'z verse wasn't even a battle rhyme...and he bit my avy...lol
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^thanx king.............................................. .................................................. ..........
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cmon quit sleepin on dis shit we still Uppin in herre............................................. .................................................. .....................
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YOG GOT THIS MORE TALENT FPR BETLIG BUT YOU NEED ELIVATION NONE THE LESS.............................................. ..............
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