Tell me what y'all think..
 

See Im tha MAIN ATTRACTION/
Don't worry about tha flow nigga, I'll beat you in any orderly fashion/
I know you was smilen yesterday(thought ya got me), but ya smile is no good please-sure/
Even ya laugh looks like ya havin a seis-ure/
Nigga I will rip ya lyrically like a tissue/
You already know that no one will miss you, after I dun dissed you/
Ya charcoal b*tch ass got b*tch slapped by my battles in beggining stages/
And if ya fitten to challenge me and come close to winnin, ya myswell make some OVER NIGHT changes/
Im commin atcha bout to leave and uneraseable dent/ Nigga why the hell did ya put my rhymes up for rent/ You tryin to rap iceman, but trust me..you are no 50 Cent/ Although if you make a album that's how much it SHOULD be worth/ Just admit it iceman, ya mom's tried to kill ya and overcooked ya at birth/ Yo b*tch ass is justa hermaphadite/ Nigga your are the numba one HO on this site/ Nigga got beat in the first round of the tourney/ That first round loss is just a trip, you battlin me its gonna be a journey/ Im not a thug nigga there is too many of those/ Your face and complection myswell go in tha category of tha rest of those HOES//




just a lil sumthin..tell me whatchu think...


-wun

yo we can get it crackin my nig do what u do dog 4-12 holleeezy

Aiight dawgie..just send me a message wit da link on it and I will battle you.

Anyone else???

yeah that was a pretty nice flow even though it fell off at times but overall was good. the vocab was good and so was the wordplay. hey return the favor check out http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4487#post834487

Thanks bra

that was pretty nice, i felt it at times, nice vocab and word play, u can keep those comin

yup yup..

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