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N.O.face 10-11-03 04:10 PM

My Turn
 
I sit silent.. page looking pen get violent..just gaze at them they don't want me wildin..study days on them and to tell the truth I wouldn't let my dog graze on them..they ain't worth the shit..south in like pac so you know they ain't no hurting this..probably yell stop when I work the fifth..and go mase when a ni**a straight mirk ya click..you played out like eartha kitt..put a barrel to ya face and show how dark the earth could get..quit rhyming become a dancer start triwking kid..what the fuck are you romancing them stones..leave it alone I'm the answer like iverson.....but yet and still I feel like sir charles surreal..with no rings or things..just playoffs a lot loss..and still maintain thru it all me and my dogs..a neva change or fall the souths back..king of the shit..this time young nigga its bout stacks..I'm fiendin to hit..tha game with rhymes 2 house that..and leave lames behind like asscracks...

N.O.face 10-11-03 04:16 PM

whats up pepz give me some advice holla

:: too easy :: 10-11-03 04:16 PM

that was sikk man, nice multis and the flow was hot

leave it alone in the answer like iverson -> you know its been used alot but its still a good line, plus it ties in with what your saying

keep it up man

peace

gbacd 10-11-03 05:11 PM

yeah i think u did good

gbacd 10-11-03 05:12 PM

but N.O. face kicked ur ass!

c0zmick 10-11-03 05:18 PM

It was decent. I liked the multis. Some of the lines were weak though. Other than that, it was good.

gbacd 10-11-03 11:37 PM

keep'em comin

Drummerman 10-13-03 01:26 AM

i was good i guess...
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