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Avalon vs 13th Disciple
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aiight.....lets do this.....good luck
came 2 the point of being more than played, u just all out boring ur garbage...and i'll let the trashman take u out in the morning lyrics soaring...no need to hype it up make claims wit my boasts cuz while i'm droppin bars Avalon competes by droppin freeposts talent is ghost, never existed, peeped ur recent battles u wrote shit, i'd cut this dick in half & let him know the balls in my court time 2 abort,challengin the champ?!,postin up is simply irrelevance Av said i'm soft...so i emailed him my dick for hard evidence..... no sense, how can ur ship sail when my flows has it already sinkin & i'll force u to give me brains.......just to fuck what ur thinking drown ur alias Island, ironic 13th Disciple, yet puttin u thru Hell throw a lit Optimo blunt at u cuz u bout to feel the burn of an 'L' off u fell, but i'm still standin,rip ur jaw off so how can u spit?... gettin ass fuck'd in the mirror is how Av watches who he beefs wit u ain't sick, i'm poppin more CAPS than Shady's mom takin pills.. its my fate to drop lead on this kid...so u can say u got Iron-Will chill, return ur karoeke machine back, cuz Av u just can't rap... matter of fact, i'll just Knockout this child & leave this Kid-Napped *slap*, got u sayin my name in vain cuz u already sayin GodDamn Av's a fake thug, like a blood wearin a confederate headband.. man, i got children of my own thats why i hate 2 spank this kid NWA said 'Fuck The Police'....thats why i'm slaughtering this pig split wig, wit ur amputated fists u ain't connectin wit ur hits... i'm tearin u a new asshole....cuz 13th Disciple is known to rip shit knight bit, peep his site,u'll have a better chance winnin the battle cuz i'll fuck u at Eve....then turn around & eat ur Adams apple.... u can't grapple, i suggest walk away wit ur neck still intact... u so weak...i'm keyin this verse to a country musical track.... wack!...like failed suicidal attempts kid u ain't makin this cut.... and therez one thing worser than ur punches...u showin up... |
All I can say is I hope that Avalon drops a strong verse!
Good luck 2 bof ..................................... ............................. ................ ......... ... .. . ~DIMEZ~ much luv 13th |
Fareal dog..?
*clears throat* Av's rippin you natives... killin deciples till they can't come back, Cause ya verse last week was hot & original... till I read Camarac's... . . . . . . . . . 13th's jokes only... and kids... it's not hard to down him, check his roster, only question is why clown...? When they all around him... look at his verse people... after mine... it'll be hard to salvage it, cause it's all ass... dick... like where's Mike's was and Kalvin's is... as a note fuck 13th... ya boring... and ya name sucks, forget fresh concepts... that bitch can't even think of a played punch... and stay cunt when Av's tearin you up... your win is a doubt in mind, ya punches misbehave... the way they stepped out of line... Av's known to harass... cuss and then stomp out, opponents with a wack rhyme scheme... but you only have the font now... N for those thinkin I can't do it, I'm showin ya wrongly doubted, Av's fillin Diciples up with more clips than a staples outlet... Coolie you're only scum, never said one thing considered amazin, who's name resembles his punches more than The End... of civilization..? You oughtta know... Homey, I author bludgeons Beatin me's easy like emptyin a tub wit a teaspoon... while the waters runnin... ur fam sent me here... tryin to get a message thru u a problem child Coolie... they had a prob to get rid of you... speakin of crews I'm combustible... see the chemical forming, 13ths' the back burner, Av' "head of the pack" like surgeon general warnings... I saw Regime's roster.... only sheep fuckers allowed in the crew, cause believe it or not... they're the only ones that are feelin ewe... You misplaced your flow..? but 13th you had none, thought I'd give you your first loss... same one there's 23 sequels of..! I'll claim the prize... seriously that's just something winners get, while you sit in a wet suit... happy... to be surfing the internet... face it, I'ma be ya idol pops till ya heart and vitals stop, proud to be 3-0 in a league where Taktik got a title shot..? & whats funny, is you act like we wouldnt go on without joo I'd include an IM quote for proof... but... noone talks about you... and I'm done... |
Damn...
This was ill... 13th came nice... Great punches... not many personals.. but you wanted that... You misplaced your flow..? but 13th you had none, thought I'd give you your first loss... same one there's 23 sequels of..! & whats funny, is you act like we wouldnt go on without joo I'd include an IM quote for proof... but... noone talks about you... Those two bars took it for Av. Av came with nice wordplay as always and went personal... Hmm... tied on flow... I think I'll have to vote Av. however... In the closest of battles... |
yes...this was definately a good battle...uppin this thing yall.......
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Damn this was truely an ill battle................could be a Legend piece..........
13 Disciple Very good verse........you had many hard punches...........many that i went oooo and ahhh at..........then there was some that i went huh? The problem you had was stayin consistent........as there was some lines i jus wasnt feelin............you had good flow and good wordplay..............but overall it was a nice verse 13th's Quotables - 42/50 time 2 abort,challengin the champ?!,postin up is simply irrelevance Av said i'm soft...so i emailed him my dick for hard evidence..... lyrics soaring...no need to hype it up make claims wit my boasts cuz while i'm droppin bars Avalon competes by droppin freeposts =============================================== Avalon Very nice verse as well..........some nice personals.......and very nice punches.......you were better with consistency, altho your verse had its faults...........you and 13th were fairly even with flow, wordplay and personals..........but you took punches AV's Quotables - 46/50 13th's jokes only... and kids... it's not hard to down him, check his roster, only question is why clown...? When they all around him... speakin of crews I'm combustible... see the chemical forming, 13ths' the back burner, Av' "head of the pack" like surgeon general warnings... =============================================== Breakdown Punches - Avalon(more consistent) Personals - Even Flow - Even Wordplay - Even Structure - 13th Overal Vote: Avalon |
came 2 the point of being more than played, u just all out boring
ur garbage...and i'll let the trashman take u out in the morning Nice Opener lyrics soaring...no need to hype it up make claims wit my boasts cuz while i'm droppin bars Avalon competes by droppin freeposts Fresh Personal talent is ghost, never existed, peeped ur recent battles u wrote shit, i'd cut this dick in half & let him know the balls in my court Wordplay Was Pretty Hard time 2 abort,challengin the champ?!,postin up is simply irrelevance Av said i'm soft...so i emailed him my dick for hard evidence..... Sorta Played But Was Tight no sense, how can ur ship sail when my flows has it already sinkin & i'll force u to give me brains.......just to fuck what ur thinking Nice Hard Punch drown ur alias Island, ironic 13th Disciple, yet puttin u thru Hell throw a lit Optimo blunt at u cuz u bout to feel the burn of an 'L' Straight Up... Sorta Choppy off u fell, but i'm still standin,rip ur jaw off so how can u spit?... gettin ass fuck'd in the mirror is how Av watches who he beefs wit Damn.......ILL Personal u ain't sick, i'm poppin more CAPS than Shady's mom takin pills.. its my fate to drop lead on this kid...so u can say u got Iron-Will Got Me Shook....In Confusion chill, return ur karoeke machine back, cuz Av u just can't rap... matter of fact, i'll just Knockout this child & leave this Kid-Napped LOL......Good Diss *slap*, got u sayin my name in vain cuz u already sayin GodDamn Av's a fake thug, like a blood wearin a confederate headband.. Wordplay Is 13th's Specialty man, i got children of my own thats why i hate 2 spank this kid NWA said 'Fuck The Police'....thats why i'm slaughtering this pig LOL That SongWas Tight split wig, wit ur amputated fists u ain't connectin wit ur hits... i'm tearin u a new asshole....cuz 13th Disciple is known to rip shit *GIGGLES* 13th Hilarous With Punches And Wordplay knight bit, peep his site,u'll have a better chance winnin the battle cuz i'll fuck u at Eve....then turn around & eat ur Adams apple.... AHH Metnal Pictures Not Good u can't grapple, i suggest walk away wit ur neck still intact... u so weak...i'm keyin this verse to a country musical track.... Damn Thats Pretty Weak... If You Can Blaze To Country wack!...like failed suicidal attempts kid u ain't makin this cut.... and therez one thing worser than ur punches...u showin up... LOL Damn.... Good Hard Punches..Nice Wordplay Overall 13th Did Aight I Say 86.5/100 13th's jokes only... and kids... it's not hard to down him, check his roster, only question is why clown...? When they all around him... Personal Was Tight... look at his verse people... after mine... it'll be hard to salvage it, cause it's all ass... dick... like where's Mike's was and Kalvin's is... Got Me Confused as a note fuck 13th... ya boring... and ya name sucks, forget fresh concepts... that bitch can't even think of a played punch... Um......Sorta Simple and stay cunt when Av's tearin you up... your win is a doubt in mind, ya punches misbehave... the way they stepped out of line... Nice Punch And Wordplay Av's known to harass... cuss and then stomp out, opponents with a wack rhyme scheme... but you only have the font now... LOL N for those thinkin I can't do it, I'm showin ya wrongly doubted, Av's fillin Diciples up with more clips than a staples outlet... Damn...You Fuckin His Ass Up Then Coolie you're only scum, never said one thing considered amazin, who's name resembles his punches more than The End... of civilization..? ? Is Right You oughtta know... Homey, I author bludgeons Beatin me's easy like emptyin a tub wit a teaspoon... while the waters runnin... What An Imagination...That'd Take Forever ur fam sent me here... tryin to get a message thru u a problem child Coolie... they had a prob to get rid of you... Personal Crazy speakin of crews I'm combustible... see the chemical forming, 13ths' the back burner, Av' "head of the pack" like surgeon general warnings... Nice I saw Regime's roster.... only sheep fuckers allowed in the crew, cause believe it or not... they're the only ones that are feelin ewe... Not Great Bar You misplaced your flow..? but 13th you had none, thought I'd give you your first loss... same one there's 23 sequels of..! Damn............ I'll claim the prize... seriously that's just something winners get, while you sit in a wet suit... happy... to be surfing the internet... LOL Nice Wordplay And Punch face it, I'ma be ya idol pops till ya heart and vitals stop, proud to be 3-0 in a league where Taktik got a title shot..? Nice Flow, Multies, And Wordplay & whats funny, is you act like we wouldnt go on without joo I'd include an IM quote for proof... but... noone talks about you... Damn...Nice Finisher Avalons Shit Was Tight Got Alot Of Confusin Punches But They Was Tight Overall- 86.3/100 Final Vote=13th Disciple I Simple Thought He Came Harder With Wordplay, And Punches But DAMN This Battle Was Close As Hell Props To Ya Both No Hate AV |
Wow... Nice Battle Kids... Was Actually Worth The Time... 13 Had Witty Punches... But All The Times He Said He'll Do Somethin Or Is Goin To Do Something... Really Took Away From The Quality Of It And Got Old Quick. Av Had This Down With Punches And Personals... So I Gotta Throw This To Him... Good Drops From Both Though.
Vote=Av |
Breakdown
Personals=Avalon Punches=13th Disciple Multis=Avalon Wordplay=Avalon Complexity=13th Disciple Creativity=Avalon Structure=13th Disciple Vocabulary=Avalon Overall=Avalon Favorite Line By Avalon: speakin of crews I'm combustible... see the chemical forming, 13th's' the back burner, Av' "head of the pack" like surgeon general warnings... ....................That was some ill shit...................that line edged it .................................................. ........................................... --------------------------------------------------- Favorite line by 13th Disciple: time 2 abort,challengin the champ?!,postin up is simply irrelvance Av said I'm soft...so I emailed him my dick for hard evidence..... ...............................That should have put him in check................... --------------------------------------------------- Vote: Avalon GOOD SHIT HOMIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
im busy right now, but i'll most def be back to drop my 2 cents . . .
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Damn
....................... I Honestly Thought 13th Took It ....................... But Idk It Was Really Fuckin Close But Ya'll Seem To Think Avalon Won |
^Kid you barely got my lines... for one thing... if you don't get it... why vote..? God... you're a idiot...
Not sayin shit about the vote... but you are an idiot... |
yea i agree with everyone else.......
i think Av got this one......this was a........ real fuckin classic battle......props to u 13th........ 2 of the dopest heads on this site......... but yeah...Av took this with a more consistent verse........ a little bit of better flow.....killer punches....and...... killer personals.....13th u had a decent solid verse also........ but it lacked just a little bit....and it just...... wasn't enough to take Av's verse....... good battle...no hate...much respect......but my vote goes to [b]AVALON[B]........ good battle...stay up... yep.. pz... ->Je@!<- |
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