If you like me or not
 

U tune in for a g viewer discretion advise/
Now i'm abou't to turn this whole place upside down/
As i awake from my sleeping slumber clutching my glock/
Taken the sock wipe my dick from busting out all this white shit/ Bitch you should have known we can only be friends/
No in between me and you will be a sin again/
I can't believe so many niggaz want me dead/
Forget abou't rewards niggaz doing this to make me scared/
My plan to kill'em all make'em dissapear/
My hands holding the key rather you fucking live/
I come again in prison out of these gates of hell/
Flames coming behind me burning the whole world/
It's the truth in my words nothing is left to say/

i wasnt really feelin that shit, work on rhymes and flows

your flows were weak
keep on postin you'll get better

^^u guys r gay, but anywho that was ok for a newb, ur vocab and wordplay was a little weak, so u should elevate a little on that, ur flow fell off at times during that post, and ur content and topic were a little played, keep droppin though, u got potential.

peace......

it was straight dog try to use multis
and flow, structure was ok though
keep postin

flow was off....easy way to check is just say each line out loud...
word choise was not 2 well...find other ways of saying things..
example: hat cap cover headgear helmet

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85236