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quickstrike Vs BE BRAVE
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Blah blah blah you know the rules No max lines Both drop at same time Q: Are you a Female? |
im male im here i got this go........ill spit second............................................ .................................................. ...................................
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Oh Ok.......cuz I think Girls from Illinois is Sooooooo Beautiful
I'll spit in like 10 mins ~1 ********************D*********A************M****** ****N*************** |
its been way more than 10 minutes dude y aint you spittin yet??????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????
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Oh my Bad
Retract Ya Verse Quick Before Ya Raps Get Served-Sick, Cuz You Know-An-Amateur-Is.../ Ya Couldnt Go "Toe To Toe" With Me.. If You Was A Fuckin "Manucurist".../ I'm Smashin quickstrike's Face In... Appeasin To Bones... Ya Leavin my Throne.../ Go Join a Gay activist Group... Then You'd Be in a 'League of ya Own'.../ Foul-Wit-Plans,Created-Pre-Meditated For Vortexes To Crowd-Ya-Glands.../ Suckin Up Finger and Palm Bones Incase You Intend To Get Out-Of-Hand.../ i Usin Caps Without My Finger On Top-Of-Shift, Qucik To Smash N Knock-Ya-Spitz.../ quickstrike Lookin At Dis Verse Sayin My Virus Aint Da Only Time My Comp-Is-Sick.../ I'm Leavin Strike Speechless An Priceless Like Hostages Bein Taped../ Hes Wearin Condomz On His Feet Cauze U Can't-Stand Yo Wordz Bein Raped.../ Your Rhymez iz Childish-Outburstz An You Thrown Tantrumz Don't Fit/ I aint Gotta Search 4 Yo Birth-CErtificate Just 2 Prove u "Aint-Shit".... /(Ancient) Bust Shit? No, Quickstrike Sucks Dick...A Brainless Fag With No Thought Out-Rhymes.../ He Knows He's Dead On Site....That's Why He Drops Those Chalked Italic Outlines.../ |
man where did u get that, did you have to pay a fee,
i can correct that verse with three words...the delete key, that shit wasnt ill, check yurself you sound like Vince Gill im a newbie, but nigga afta this you'll be out to sue me, i aint seen a rap so lame, i guess your mommas to blame, aint it a shame, that we cant share the fame, get off this shit, dont take these kinda hits, silly bitch, my dicks for your your chicks, not your gay activist group, i dont wanna be like you, you say i Aint-Shit, well look you rap like your 2, well imma end this sick shit, you might wanna correct your illness..while your seeing my greatness.. |
aight ima say be brave wins this, heres my breakdown......
structure-tie flow-quick vocab-tie wordplay-be punches-be personals-be overall-be props to the both of ya, but ima say be brave takes this...... peace....... |
we needa get this battle closed out cuzin cause i wanna move on and do more battles so people vote and thanks :d................................................ ...........
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aight brave ya had a good flow, good structure, couple aight punches--kinda creative---quickstrike ya had a good opener then the shit just fell off from there---vote=brave
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i just want some more votes in this shit cause no one seems to be voting on this battle i dont get it..............uppin for sum more votes
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votes please???????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????
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structure-tie
flow-quickstrike punches-bebrave personals-bebrave overall-bebrave be brave got his nuff sed can u both plz go vote on dis http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85499 |
Be Brave took this shit in all categories...I don't think this needs any more explaining..........................
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this battle was one sided
flow = quick punches = brave wordplay = brave metas = brave consistency = brave vote = brave hit this battle up, its being slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84033 |
Be Brave- flow was on point, nice punches and wordplay...
had some mulites that I liked, and a decent vocab... nice shit, I rate you a 7. Quickstrike- flow was ok... had a few punches, but nothing extrodinary... vocab was pretty weak... and your wordplay was good though... I rate you a 4. vote- Be Brave |
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