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BE BRAVE 10-12-03 05:11 PM

quickstrike Vs BE BRAVE
 
Yo check in

Blah blah blah you know the rules

No max lines

Both drop at same time


Q: Are you a Female?

quickstrike 10-12-03 05:19 PM

im male im here i got this go........ill spit second............................................ .................................................. ...................................

BE BRAVE 10-12-03 05:22 PM

Oh Ok.......cuz I think Girls from Illinois is Sooooooo Beautiful

I'll spit in like 10 mins ~1

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quickstrike 10-12-03 08:07 PM

its been way more than 10 minutes dude y aint you spittin yet??????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????

BE BRAVE 10-12-03 08:51 PM

Oh my Bad

Retract Ya Verse Quick Before Ya Raps Get Served-Sick, Cuz You Know-An-Amateur-Is.../
Ya Couldnt Go "Toe To Toe" With Me.. If You Was A Fuckin "Manucurist".../
I'm Smashin quickstrike's Face In... Appeasin To Bones... Ya Leavin my Throne.../
Go Join a Gay activist Group... Then You'd Be in a 'League of ya Own'.../
Foul-Wit-Plans,Created-Pre-Meditated For Vortexes To Crowd-Ya-Glands.../
Suckin Up Finger and Palm Bones Incase You Intend To Get Out-Of-Hand.../
i Usin Caps Without My Finger On Top-Of-Shift, Qucik To Smash N Knock-Ya-Spitz.../
quickstrike Lookin At Dis Verse Sayin My Virus Aint Da Only Time My Comp-Is-Sick.../
I'm Leavin Strike Speechless An Priceless Like Hostages Bein Taped../
Hes Wearin Condomz On His Feet Cauze U Can't-Stand Yo Wordz Bein Raped.../
Your Rhymez iz Childish-Outburstz An You Thrown Tantrumz Don't Fit/
I aint Gotta Search 4 Yo Birth-CErtificate Just 2 Prove u "Aint-Shit".... /(Ancient)
Bust Shit? No, Quickstrike Sucks Dick...A Brainless Fag With No Thought Out-Rhymes.../
He Knows He's Dead On Site....That's Why He Drops Those Chalked Italic Outlines.../

quickstrike 10-13-03 04:44 PM

man where did u get that, did you have to pay a fee,
i can correct that verse with three words...the delete key,
that shit wasnt ill, check yurself you sound like Vince Gill
im a newbie, but nigga afta this you'll be out to sue me,
i aint seen a rap so lame, i guess your mommas to blame,
aint it a shame, that we cant share the fame,
get off this shit, dont take these kinda hits,
silly bitch, my dicks for your your chicks,
not your gay activist group, i dont wanna be like you,
you say i Aint-Shit, well look you rap like your 2,
well imma end this sick shit, you might wanna correct your illness..while your seeing my greatness..

gotaloveforrap 10-13-03 05:01 PM

aight ima say be brave wins this, heres my breakdown......

structure-tie
flow-quick
vocab-tie
wordplay-be
punches-be
personals-be
overall-be

props to the both of ya, but ima say be brave takes this......

peace.......

quickstrike 10-14-03 10:55 PM

we needa get this battle closed out cuzin cause i wanna move on and do more battles so people vote and thanks :d................................................ ...........

cutastraphe 10-14-03 11:01 PM

aight brave ya had a good flow, good structure, couple aight punches--kinda creative---quickstrike ya had a good opener then the shit just fell off from there---vote=brave

peep the sig return the vote

quickstrike 10-14-03 11:21 PM

i just want some more votes in this shit cause no one seems to be voting on this battle i dont get it..............uppin for sum more votes

quickstrike 10-15-03 09:23 AM

votes please???????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????

mysterie 10-15-03 09:34 AM

structure-tie
flow-quickstrike
punches-bebrave
personals-bebrave
overall-bebrave


be brave got his nuff sed


can u both plz go vote on dis

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85499

Tha Vision 10-15-03 09:57 AM

Be Brave took this shit in all categories...I don't think this needs any more explaining..........................

KingOfKings 10-15-03 10:23 AM

this battle was one sided

flow = quick
punches = brave
wordplay = brave
metas = brave
consistency = brave

vote = brave

hit this battle up, its being slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84033

A.T. 10-15-03 11:32 AM

Be Brave- flow was on point, nice punches and wordplay...
had some mulites that I liked, and a decent vocab... nice shit,
I rate you a 7.

Quickstrike- flow was ok... had a few punches, but nothing
extrodinary... vocab was pretty weak... and your wordplay was
good though... I rate you a 4.

vote- Be Brave


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