take a look at this
 

yo key style

when i pick up the mike, peeps are so shocked they hyperventilatin/
they think how can this cat be blessed with skillz, with no.. elevatin/

an wen i ryhme...... i try to refrain from mentionin names/
i spit flames... but i still manage to be lost up in this game/

were newbies get no votes, an most vets shit is pre-wrote/
its bit of other websites. usaually word by word, each ill quote/

but most of us accept it an let our battles be hated on/
all the mods on tihs site, cause shit, get mass-debated on/

that it a short lil keystyle


gimme sum feedback y'all

for a newb that wasnt that bad......next time i suggest tryin to make it a little longer, ur vocab and wordplay was pretty good, try and include some more multis though, and try and pick a not so played on topic, other than it was pretty good, keep postin dude, u got potential.

peace......

that was a good flow.....
just keep postin and workin on making your flows longer.....
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aiight thanks for that gotlove an drummer , i'ma keep droppin till in kno im good enough to battel,

but if any1 wants to vote honestly on this, wateva vote the cat is for, it will be appreciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84826

i battled right off the bat but i lost.
i lost cuz i didnt have good anything.
but you could win if you tried
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i wasnt syain anythin about your battle record, iwas jus sayin i'm goin to keep postin in open mic till i feel ready to battle wit peeps

uppin 4 more feedback

i think you can battle...
and win just challenge someone (not me)
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it was straight dog
not to much excitement
keep postin though

uppin for more feedback................
please y'all give a fair vote ont this battle if ya hav time
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85357

yeah for a newb yo shit was pretty tight but u still need some elevatin and shit wit ur vocab and flows and all well peace

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Flow was there just was a short piece could of made it longer
best line in this was prolly:
"an wen i ryhme...... i try to refrain from mentionin names/
i spit flames... but i still manage to be lost up in this game/"
keep postin and plz return the favor of feedback :)

Return the favor and drop feedback on this plz