***Missing You***(PEEP)
 

This song i wrote for a girl i like:o

Started off by phonecalls going to late at light...
But its fading like..were falling apart as the days go..
Aint feelin right..i want to hear ur voice forever as the days show..
the photo u sent me never left my heart..its like we drift apart..
lets have a new start..cause i dont want you to leave me..
the day at the park..said i loved you, didnt u believe me..
them nights we had..hearing u say "hello" makes me feel glad..
lately u make me feel bad..cuz i cant see u as much as i want to..
why cant we keep wat we had..can I express how much i want u..
feel like we were ment to be all along..lets fix wat went wrong..
my love for u is so strong..but i really wana love you more..
i wan scream that i love you, dont even care if anyone listens too..
i want wat we had before..bree im missin you..

Baby u know that im...Missing You..
I just wanna be, Kissing You..
I aint tricking you..Cuz im missing you..

the day i saw you i was blinded by ur pretti face..
wat part of ur love for me was misplaced..ur not acting the same..
ur something i cant hate..im happy just when i hear ur name..
what did i do wrong..do you love me is wat i should really know..
have you felt u loved me for too long..were did those feelings go..
i was in heaven for that day we kissed..not kiss, it was u i missed..
if i had a geenie, too have u in my arms would be my first wish..
can i make it better??..cuz i want u to love me like before..
hope u read this letter...i want my happiness to be restored..
you brighten up my day wen im seeing you..say u wont leave me..
i just wanna be with you..do u also get chills when u see me..
want us to be together...us two..tell u my secrets cuz i trust u..
be with u forever..a kiss, a hugs enough too..1 thing i need to say and thats




I LOVE YOU.....

Baby u know that im...Missing You..
I just wanna be, Kissing You..
I aint tricking you..Cuz im missing you..

good drop, i think she'll like it...i think you brought your emotions an told her wut needed to be said, the flow was on point..get a nice beat pull it together...prolly land your girl...good luck..peace

my little shep is growing up *wipes tear away* but no really it had good flow, and its good points, im sure u will make this girl happy cuz im sure i would love that from u ;) anyways... good stuff tell me how it goes

LMAO!!!!!! lil' Shepy'z in love...;)...rule #1 in da game...never tell a girl you love her...cause then she'll take advantage of you...but this track was diggity dopey fresh fizzle...I seen you had a few muti'z up in there...which was good...and the flow was on point...now holla at my open mic piece called "Self Evaluation"...hoe...lol...do it... now lil' Chrissy...;)

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What That Says :)

why is it always my shit that gets slept on :(

What it Says^

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fo real dawg i am sorry for sleepin on this shit dawg but i neva seen it but anyway.. ur structure was tight dawg and the vocab and shit was tight too.. but yeah what KoT said never tell chicks emotional shit they will just fuck wit it

thanks for that dawg^^^

UPPIN DONT FUCKIN SLEEP

yo real nice drop homie...flow was good and your content really showed your emotions....i'm sure the girl you wrote it for will like it...nice drop, keep dropping....

o yea if you get a chance can you peep my latest open mic and hit me up with some feedback...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85644

that was real good
nice flow & vocab & shit
keep on droppin'
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