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Mc All 10-13-03 07:16 AM

watch your back
 
watch your back no your not black
u wack u better stay of the crack
mann go back 2 primary school
and read some nursery rymes
any way stay out my way don't play
lil crane it might start 2 rain better start 2
complain go back on the plane
back 2 that shit hole u came u bitch

no afence 2 anyone but lil crane hes a lil bitch

N.D.eva 10-13-03 07:21 AM

lmao, this shit is wak, i cant beleive you even took the time to post it, no offence but surely you can do better than that, it flowed like a nursery rhyme...................................
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Trah Siph 10-13-03 07:56 AM

that was fuckin shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

worst I've ever read

AssassinMC 10-13-03 08:05 AM

yo mc u need to elevate badly. i sorta see potential in u tho. peep my open mic

/:Ayura:\ 10-13-03 08:10 AM

hahaha, i know that dickhead, he goes to my school.

he gets the wrong impression of rap, he's a dopey little fucker.

maxximum 10-13-03 09:01 AM

this shit is motherfuckin wack
-1000000000000000/10 motherfucker!

LiraculKorean 10-13-03 10:01 AM

fool... shit was ill.. nah dawg not feelin it at all.. i cant believe i read it all, let alone reply.. sympathy bro.. thats all i have for u... all i can say is get a dictionary and start reading...
some words u shoud look up... skill, confidence, anger, multi, structure, target, illuminate, elevate, and mistake... cmon dawg u got potential.. just got find it and wear it.. keep spittn one.


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