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brainsurgeon 10-13-03 09:32 AM

pissed at arrogant wack lyricists
 
fuck the lying babies it's becuz of the love i innovate to make my rhyming crazy
but what's the point, i visited a site where all the wacks conspired against me
with sickly keystyles the brainsurgeon proceeded to spit wild
choked a swimmer to show those jokers the meaning of "murderous freestyle"!!
except faggots couldn't read-rhyme, even when i dropped to mutilate
now i seriously think there're wack niggaz who would bitch, rather than elevate!

LiraculKorean 10-13-03 09:38 AM

man... incredibly short but wasnt too bad.. the vocab was aite.. the multis were nice and the structure is nice. and definitly sent a message... but it seems to be meant to be short..nonethelesss it was a short sweet peice keep elevatin, one.

N.D.eva 10-13-03 11:41 AM

short and sweet..........nice!
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...................................Holla!

gotaloveforrap 10-13-03 01:31 PM

^^^straight wordness.....i thought it was kinda short, but it was to the point which made for a pretty good read, ur vocab was lackin a little, but ur wordplay and content was pretty good, u had a pretty original topic, overall id say it was a pretty good drop, keep postin homie, that was nice.

peace.......

yog_dogg 10-13-03 03:04 PM

yeah pretty tight sometimes the length doesnt matta jus al long as u get ur word across and its ill and shit


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