Lyrical Warfare
 

*Lites Blunt*


Yea we the new warriors of our time....yea roll wit me

Check it


We tha new millenium souljahs
Marchin forth, engaging warfare
Fightin just to make this game more fair
The prime enemies iz the hata-nation
They the so called new sensation
Two-faced nigguhz attackin, playin kats
You real, you end up wit a stabbed back
Itz at the point were itz no longer lyrical
Itz a psykoligical thing, this game needs a miracle
Ride wit me, techs blaze, u kno i'm feelin ya'll
We fite bak, blazin tracks, there's no fear in ya'll
Stearin ya'll in the rite direction, away from curruption
Hearin ya'lls confessions,nah we ain't be rushin
One last time, we find strength to fite for tears
Follow me, mic's as steeds, we engage in lyrical warfare

iight short lil drop....bar structure is a bit off but meh

tight drop dawg that was some ill shit i enjoyed readin it.. keep postin and elevatin

thank duke...uppin

that was pretty damn good for a newb, u had some good vocab and wordplay, next time ima say try and fit in a few more multis and metas, but its all good, ur flow seemed to be on target throughout most of ur post, and next time the only suggestion is to pick a better topic to write about, cause lyrical warfare is kinda played, but u got ability, so keep droppin.......

peace........

fer real...uppin