Island VS Jay Pana
 

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Check In Due: Wendesday 10-15-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-17-03

First To 5 Wins

Good Luck....

word to ur mother...

checkin in

:)

I'm here.

*walks in*


Well, Guess he's gonna wait to see what I'm gonna do. Here ya go lil' fella!







so the board pisses you off... bores you to death, ok pause,
and this is the same fuckin board... you got 16 names registered on..?!
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iight J, you'll throw 20, but it's high time to leave,
and don't try channelin ya anger, no one needs lifetime tv.
this guy survive me? he's tame n irrelevant,
plus the vagina monologues run on Jay's stages of development.
put the gauge to ya helmet bitch, you a geek dude n homo,
ya only ranked #1 the first time due to dq's n' no shows.
so hoe, we're surprised you showed, I was hopin you'd die,
cause when ya talent peak's in audio... it got poked in the eye.
treat ya girl's pussy like baseball when I'm layin hoes,
cause when she pops flys her shits deep but playable.
I'll provide plenty of ammo n' slay without sorrow,
& yes ya styles ahead of it's time... since garbage day is tomorrow.
gave an appearance of talent but all Pan did was con amateurs,
while I'll put this bitch on this ice faster than Michelle Kwan's manager.
ya beyond ridin, takin my lines... I aint resortin to lies,
cause you livin on Island since Back to the Future... guess I'm Lorf of the Flies.
rampage ya life, left for dead with the rude confessional,
That Jay's career's goin downhill... faster than luge professionals.





and I'm spent.

that's supposed to be LORD OF THE FLIES...

umm...

First Kid In A While That Showed Against Me, You Got Some Balls...
But You Rise To Tha Occasion Slower Than Dicks On Viagra. . Falls...
All Prayers And No Miracles, Like He Wrote His Verse In The Vatican...
He Runs Through More L's Than Rice Runs Through Unfortunate Africans...
Face Your Destruction, You're The Bruisee and I'm The Bruiser...
He's Known For Isolation, 'Cuz No One Likes A Loser...
Blame Evolve For Your Loss, I Keep Tha Wins On Lock...
I Had Your Chances Yanked Long Before This Punch Left You Socked...
His Punches Are Played More Than My Marvin Gaye 8-Track...
He Tried To Be Original, Obviously He Didn't Make Tha Cut And Stayed Back...
In Fact He's Known For That, He Ought To Be Used To Rejection...
If British Knights Is His Crew I Guess They Up And Left Him...
I Would've Asked Him To Come Hard Against Me, But He's Not Lyrically Inclined...
His Chances Of Winning Has Tha Same Outcome As His Try Out For Merk Squad...DECLINED!!!

oh...

and his 16 username line is a false personal...

ISLAND
bitin... recyclin maybe? it's one or the other. Because jaypana never said that and on top of that he's only had three user-names in his history on RB. false personals kill your verse...

n/e way
^^^dat was hott
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^^ shoulda worded that better, but it was a neat thought
&^^^ that diss was fuckin garbage... shit took away from your verse, yea it's wordplay but in the end what are you saying? "Jaypana can't channel his anger!" yea... whack

JAY
i think both of those were funny as hell, the Viagra...falls, was hott.
eh...
good
dopest personals and hardest hittin punches in the battle. Especially the declined shit. I saw that thread, wit the big red letters. These here took the battle.

vote - jaypana

so the board pisses you off... bores you to death, ok pause,
and this is the same fuckin board... you got 16 names registered on..?!
Not bad... kind of a fake personal... but good
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iight J, you'll throw 20, but it's high time to leave,
and don't try channelin ya anger, no one needs lifetime tv.
kinda missed this punch....
this guy survive me? he's tame n irrelevant,
plus the vagina monologues run on Jay's stages of development.
lmao at line 2 ... good shit
put the gauge to ya helmet bitch, you a geek dude n homo,
ya only ranked #1 the first time due to dq's n' no shows.
good personal....
so hoe, we're surprised you showed, I was hopin you'd die,
cause when ya talent peak's in audio... it got poked in the eye.
not bad..... not the best...
treat ya girl's pussy like baseball when I'm layin hoes,
cause when she pops flys her shits deep but playable.
LMAO.... great bar here.....
I'll provide plenty of ammo n' slay without sorrow,
& yes ya styles ahead of it's time... since garbage day is tomorrow.
Ill punch... very nice
gave an appearance of talent but all Pan did was con amateurs,
while I'll put this bitch on this ice faster than Michelle Kwan's manager.
Nice punch.....
ya beyond ridin, takin my lines... I aint resortin to lies,
cause you livin on Island since Back to the Future... guess I'm Lorf of the Flies.
Nice... doubt some of the young kids on here will get it tho...
rampage ya life, left for dead with the rude confessional,
That Jay's career's goin downhill... faster than luge professionals.
Nice closer

Good verse... picked up as it went along.....

First Kid In A While That Showed Against Me, You Got Some Balls...
But You Rise To Tha Occasion Slower Than Dicks On Viagra. . Falls...
Nice second line... set up was a little weak
All Prayers And No Miracles, Like He Wrote His Verse In The Vatican...
He Runs Through More L's Than Rice Runs Through Unfortunate Africans...
nice punches here...
Face Your Destruction, You're The Bruisee and I'm The Bruiser...
He's Known For Isolation, 'Cuz No One Likes A Loser...
weak here....
Blame Evolve For Your Loss, I Keep Tha Wins On Lock...
I Had Your Chances Yanked Long Before This Punch Left You Socked...
kinda weak again....
His Punches Are Played More Than My Marvin Gaye 8-Track...
He Tried To Be Original, Obviously He Didn't Make Tha Cut And Stayed Back...
First line was nice... second was kinda weak again...
In Fact He's Known For That, He Ought To Be Used To Rejection...
If British Knights Is His Crew I Guess They Up And Left Him.
Decent personal.... not great but not bad...
I Would've Asked Him To Come Hard Against Me, But He's Not Lyrically Inclined...
His Chances Of Winning Has Tha Same Outcome As His Try Out For Merk Squad...DECLINED!!!
dont really see how the second line was personal... never tried out for MS....

Overall decent verse... really slowed down towards the middle...
Soem non-punches in there too...

Vote-Island
For remaining more consistent....

tru tru....i'm not quoting nuthin...but i'm just gonna get strait
to the point.....Pana came decent....some good wordplay and
everything...but Island came better...to me that is.....harder
punches...and some were funnier too......all in all...not bad...
vote=Island

the lifetime tv line was dope

i knew who he was.....we cyber all the time..he's the best

Vote Island

Island's verse edged him out by a little... Island's just seemed to
be a little more wittier & had that "smart ass" feel to it...

Jay you came pretty nice, but like i said... Island won by a little

3-1 Island

so the board pisses you off... bores you to death, ok pause,
and this is the same fuckin board... you got 16 names registered on..?!
^ HAHAHa funny...nice personal.

iight J, you'll throw 20, but it's high time to leave,
and don't try channelin ya anger, no one needs lifetime tv.

^I'm confused.. =[

this guy survive me? he's tame n irrelevant,
plus the vagina monologues run on Jay's stages of development.

^ Nice punch.

put the gauge to ya helmet bitch, you a geek dude n homo,
ya only ranked #1 the first time due to dq's n' no shows.

^ Tight personal.

so hoe, we're surprised you showed, I was hopin you'd die,
cause when ya talent peak's in audio... it got poked in the eye.

^haha funny.

treat ya girl's pussy like baseball when I'm layin hoes,
cause when she pops flys her shits deep but playable.

^Dam...

I'll provide plenty of ammo n' slay without sorrow,
& yes ya styles ahead of it's time... since garbage day is tomorrow.

^DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!! Best line..

gave an appearance of talent but all Pan did was con amateurs,
while I'll put this bitch on this ice faster than Michelle Kwan's manager.

^Hahaha.

ya beyond ridin, takin my lines... I aint resortin to lies,
cause you livin on Island since Back to the Future... guess I'm Lorf of the Flies.

^Tight lines..

rampage ya life, left for dead with the rude confessional,
That Jay's career's goin downhill... faster than luge professionals.

^ Tight closer..

All-round tight verse, had funny ass punches and nice personals, with a smooth flow. No flaw really, and wasen't boring at all. Nice verse..




First Kid In A While That Showed Against Me, You Got Some Balls...
But You Rise To Tha Occasion Slower Than Dicks On Viagra. . Falls...

^Ight set-up and tight second line..

All Prayers And No Miracles, Like He Wrote His Verse In The Vatican...
He Runs Through More L's Than Rice Runs Through Unfortunate Africans...

^Shit was funny..tight punch

Face Your Destruction, You're The Bruisee and I'm The Bruiser...
He's Known For Isolation, 'Cuz No One Likes A Loser...

^For sum reason i like this punch, was funny.

Blame Evolve For Your Loss, I Keep Tha Wins On Lock...
I Had Your Chances Yanked Long Before This Punch Left You Socked...

^Nice, eventhough everyone is using shit similar...

His Punches Are Played More Than My Marvin Gaye 8-Track...
He Tried To Be Original, Obviously He Didn't Make Tha Cut And Stayed Back...

^Whatever.

In Fact He's Known For That, He Ought To Be Used To Rejection...
If British Knights Is His Crew I Guess They Up And Left Him...

^ Nice lil personal...

I Would've Asked Him To Come Hard Against Me, But He's Not Lyrically Inclined...
His Chances Of Winning Has Tha Same Outcome As His Try Out For Merk Squad...DECLINED!!!

^Tight ass hell closer...

Eventhough in my view it was a close battle, I vote for Island for all his punches on-point, never fell for a quick minute, Much Respect to both of ya'll but one of ya'll had to lose...

Island wins..

4-1 Island