Twizzle Sticks VS Feeble Minded
 

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Check In Due: Wendesday 10-15-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-17-03

First To 5 Wins

Good Luck....

haha.. and who are you?

In................................................ ............................................Bitch.

Who the fuck is this ^^^^^

^Addlib, my alias is twizzle stix

LOL... aight

Feeble minded's gettin murked, he's unprepared...
Told him to bring the shit...he brought his underwear
That head problems getting worse, i'll smack you back to reality.
Spit my words in your face so you can see with some clarity.
your verse is a parody, you lack impulse and originality..
Your lines are retarded........Kinda reflects your personality,
Oh no he's gonna try and flip my verse with alias disses
How played!...i could do better....blowing you kisses...
your text is frail...mind feeble....His verses skinnier than etiopian people,
Only if i was paralyzed or jimmy scheel, then and only then would you be my equal.
They'll never make a sequel, this is the vice.....
They saw you in the first one....theres no need to see you twice.
I think 16 lines will suffice, i mean if i write any more..
you'd have to match it, and this battle would get slept on...cos the second verse is a bore.
Baltimore...i bet you get alot of respect up there.....
Your the reason for the name grizzly cos your words cant be bear'ed.....

u demanded a word, in a two person battle he advanced into 3rd
& Lib don't need fast net connection to get Band-width the herbs!
advance in the words, fuck off cuz you suck & said you hated me
and changing from Addlib to 'Lib didn't help you lay off the ADD
& like cavemen fightin for wood.. i'll get the best of sticks
cuz like obsolete ocean currents... no ones catching ya drift
thats done now, like his rap career.. rep aint what its made to be
cuz i can say no ones buying you.. w/ out talk of slavery
i wreak hell, ya fading out, i post this to kill off ya weak smell
& i dont have to give out computers to hand you De/LLs
yes, this is the sequel, last time we battled u were had bitch..
if u think different, like joke books, u must have gone Mad-Lib
ya sad, lib.. remind him, its like havin pic battles vs blind men -
ya sig says ya details got coordinates... well find them!
we hate you, bitch, & i must insist.. lib just stop sucking dick..
cuz evolve spoke for the site when he said "who the fuck is this"

feeble got this..
verse was a lot stronger..lib was forced most of tha time flow was way off..fm also had stronger start and finisher

vote feeble minded

Feeble Easy
Addlib Came Nice In His First
Few Lines.. Then Got Real Boring Real Fast

Feeble Hit Wit Consistent Punches
Pretty Much Out Did Addlib's Verse

Vote - Feeble

2-0 me upping .

VOTE - FEEBLE

Better Overall Verse..
Stronger Punches, Better Flow..
Took This Pretty Easy..
Lib's Verse Wus Iight..
Few Tite Punches Here Nd There,
But Din't Stay Consistent Thru-Out

Feeble takes this...

Better punches period...
Decent flow...
Came nice with some wordplay as well

Just and average verse from Lib...

Vote-Feeble

Vote: Feeble...


First 4 lines... beat Twizzles whole verse...

why..? his verse was weak... throughout... punches were bland...


Feeble had 60% played lines...

advance in the words, fuck off cuz you suck & said you hated me
and changing from Addlib to 'Lib didn't help you lay off the ADD

nicest line of the battle... enough for the win...




Island...

what's played?

only possible played lines were
"catching ya drift"
and
"no ones buying you"

ive never seen them before.. but of course almost everyone in this league has rapped twice as long as me.

oh yea and thats the win .