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(For Slips)Carsonjet -v- XL4REAL
pink slips
no hate no dick no bite'ing no feeding no recycling no swaying after your done 30 minutes check in 10 lines or 5 bars..... ------------------------------------------------------- |
checkin in.....i will link you..............
hurry up and check in.................... i'd like to end this A.S.A.P.............. pc*1*.....and good luck.................- --------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
ok dude checkin in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ........................................
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check it!!!!!!!
Carson aint no real assed vet he's about as much that as he is a jet, Swinging from trapeses without the saftey net, He couldnt have a 50/50 chance if he placed a bet. Theres 2 of us running + 2 of us gunning and after I knock out ya teeth you'll be the only one gumming, on ya knee's begging please give me somminc, and as I beat you down the violin starts strumming. You cant rhyme your not signed, your a sink without the plumming, a gay without the bumming, a whore who aint cumming basically you battle me ima leave you with notting. |
hey I never agreed to pink slips boy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!you never said that in the call out? whats your fucking problem?
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ok ok looking at the call out it does say that but I didnt realise and I wouldnt of agreed else....what does it mean anyways?
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^^^it means loser gets banned............................................
peace............................................. ........ |
xl4real.....5 bars
lay bak while i merk to a sway bak...... Notice Xl aint 4' real chek his intrests then his occupation- mario an excessive masterbation? I aint even finish bar 1 an he's feeling penetration/1 More of a loss ratio than a calcutator can digitize an that aint liez- 37.8%...like takin my rek an slicing it up in 5 timez circumsized/2 Causing vocabularic drama when ask'd he can't define a coma- obsessed wit less like Sims an lama's....this kat has stroked more than arnold palmer/3 Must me an optical illusion to think u doin opposite of losin- Bitch who u confusin?....its been like this since day one u kno the conlusion/4 only did 4 lines....don't need 5.... guess slips dont count then.....he didn't know.... lets get sum votes in anyways........no beef...pc*1* |
aight ima say carson takes this.....heres my breakdown.........
structure-carson flow-tie vocab-tie wordplay-tie punches-carson personals-tie overall-carson props to the both of ya, but ima say carson runs away wit the win....... peace........ |
structure-carson
flow-carson vocab-xl wordplay-carson punches-carson personals-carson tha last line was sick overall-carson xl just came way too weak his lines were played and borin....carsons flow was sick too Yall hit this up tho wit an honest vote.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85309 |
Flow-Carson
Punches-Carson Structure-Carson Vocab-XL Personals-Carson Overal-Carson That was an alright battle. XL your shit was to short and stuff like that, it was relaly short. You hit pretty good but like I said before it was way to short. |
aight heres my break down
flow=carson structure=carson creativity=carson punches=xL finisher=xL personals=carson my vote=carson hit dis wit a honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84883 |
YO I TOOk time out can u do the same ...heres the link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85309 |
CarsonJet Nice Battle
flow-cj consistency-cj punches-cj metaz-cj xl sorry man but u went out the wack way i think u wasn't even trying vote honestly on my open battles |
carson took thisshit hands down.
better flow, punches, multis, wordplay, and structure .................................................. .................................................. ...... |
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