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SkiP To My LoU vs. Pure_player69

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Originally posted by Pure_player69
WHUT A ROLE 4 A MOVIE/ U GOT ME
BENZINO CUZ ALL I SEE IZ BOOTY/ U NEED NOT 2 RAP BITCH...HIT THA BLOCK & MOVE E/ U COULDN'T
SPIT HOT EVEN IF U HAD A UZI/ A PRE-RUN...U MISTAKEN ME 4 A NIGGA WHO AIN'T DID IT/ U RAPZ
COULDN'T BE STRONG IF THEY WUZ BORN A MIDGET/ U JUS' A STR8 GIMMICK/ PRETENDED 2 BE SPLENDID/ WHUT U REALLY NEED 2 DO IZ OVA DOSE ON PILLZ..YA LIFE..END IT/ U NEED 2 GO BACK WHERE THA FUCK U FROM/ CUZ I WILL CRUnCH
CHEW & SPIT U OUT LIKE BUBBLE GUM/ IF U TALKIN'
'BOUT WACKNESS...YEAH U #1/ EVEN IF U HAD VIAGARA..HARD U CAN'T COME/
U ANIMATED LIKE A THUNDERCAT/ VERBAL BRAWLZ WIT' THA TERROR DAWG..U WANT NONE OF THAT/ I WILL PULVERIZE YA LINE LIKE I WUZ A RUNNIN' BACK/ I'M WHITE 2..U BEATIN' ME..
U MUS' BE SHOTGUNNIN' CRACK/ WHEN U SMOKE IT/
YA RAPZ LIKE YA POCKET..ON SOME BROKE SHIT/ YA VIZION WAY OFF SONNY..U REALLY NEED 2 FOCUS/ CUZ THINKIN' THAT Ur HOT I GOTTA LET U KNOW Ur BOGUS/ U AIN'T READY 4 COMBAT...U JUS' LIKE THE REST OF THEEZ COCK-A-ROACHEz

Quote:

Originally posted by SkiP To My LoU
Pure Player you think ya hot, That you're not, I'll put ya on the spot and u'll get caught. You say I'm not ready fo War, Bitch, I'm the General Patton of rap, I'll drive yer soldiers rite off the map. You think your on top of the rap game, Fulla fame. But thats funny, Never heard yer name? Your shits so tame, I'll take aim an' shoot a flame and u'll be gone before ya came. Ya betta watch out my next verse is a curse it'll have you leavin' this campaign in a hurse....Your a lyrical theif, Yer favorite books the thesaurus, Your beats one big chorus and yer rhymes der porus. I ain't no Racist I'm a Realist, Your shit is wrong and I can't feel IT!

pure player made our last thread wrong so ive made a new one with the stuff from our last one in it, they are the orignals

I THINK PURE PLAYER69 TOOK THIS ONE, BOTH OF YOU KEEP IT UP, IT SOUNDS TIGHT
BOMBATOMIK

aight skip still won, i guess ill break it down again.....

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-skip
wordplay-skip
punches-skip
personals-skip
overall-skip

props to the both of ya, but ima say skip takes this.....

peace........

dont sleep people we need the votes

PEace
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Da Banditz Rule
Dont Mess wit us..

yeah to me skip on ^^my breakdowns goes as well as gotalove so yeah skip takes tha trophy on dis shit

VOte= Pure player i liked his verse better both verses were aite but had no punches so i couldn't feel either one but i had to give it to Pure Play he came better and had an more edge to it that got my vote hollaz~1

pure got this due to more aggressiveness, better vocabulary, and better disses....Skip only had a good flow.....both of u had shitty structures.....but here's a breakdown for u two....

Multis - Pure
Metas - Pure
Wordplay - Pure
Punches - Pure
Flow - Skip
RhymeScheme - Neither
Personals - Tie
Vocab - Tie
Violence - Pure
Creativity - Pure
Complexity - Neither
Overall - Pure

peace
4:20

pure got this--i felt his flow more and he has a couple aight disses---skip ya had an ok flow but no hard punches----voote=pure

I think pure got this one, was an alrite battle but nothin special.............

punches were edged by pure and his flow was aiight whereas Skip's didn't flow that well........................there were no hard punches thrown, but Pure was stronger

Vote:PURE PLAYA

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Thanx

yeah nigga you wont to go first to five votes
peace nigga..........................................

come on people we need votes

we going the first to seven

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