Axe E. Um VS Brixton (LLL Entry Match)
 

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This Battle Is To See If Brixton Can Hang In The League...
All Those Who Vote Will Be Required To Vote On Two Issues...

1) Who Won The Battle
2) Is Brixton Good Enough To Remain In The League

Check In Due: Wendesday 10-15-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-17-03

& Axe E. Um Dont Hold Back..

Good Luck....

Ah... Hazing Time... Check In...

check in.........................axe........shit.......o h well....if i get merked at least it want of a chump..............good luk

aight ....to get in here i av to be axe.....ok...fuk it
its a task in its own but ima giv it sum pace.....

Axe is mistaken for a Jew...the way Ima circumcisin the head off this Dick...,
MOD-er-ate-or-ER? Phew!!...Axe.E.Um, Ambiguous, each of ya'll make me Sick.
19-0, is this a played Line?...but this chumps a joke,yet his rec is betta than Mine,
Read this post,follow the Sign...Rethink,hit tha W.E.C,and you'll be nearly Fine...
Student?.. jus like each of us...but unlike us, ya still fail in everythin ya Do,
Linez be a blur..nuttin but Fuzz...stamped this gimp wid a F, to show failure in You.
"Wondered why christmas missed us"...flew right by wen it saw Axe's Skills..,
Not in a mark of respect...jus for the fact that brix got ya popped like a dose of Pillz.
How ya been given Powers...wen ya reppin a retirement home like tha Warlords,
OAP'S ride to early Hours...Axe been Flat-lined as i pull away his life support Chords.


aight peeps ima prob get merked.....ye have little faith n all...

but shud i be in the league....yep.....some feedbk plz

Sorry E...

Takin It Easy On Him, Cuz I Was Taught Not To Hit A Bitch
Fuck It, Punch, Stab And Shoot Brix<---Beat Em Without A Hitch
Kid You Suck, Your Drops Aren’t Even Fit For The Vacuum
Forced To Face You Here… When I Wouldn’t Bitch Slap You
And You Admit You’re An HERBivore, You Don’t Want Beef
Attack With Boxers… Just To Make His Triple-L Career Brief
And I Would Diss Your Crew… But The Name Does It For Me
Took Me So Long To Drop, Cuz… Well… Yours Was Just Borin
Give You A Twenty-One-Gun-Salute… Straight Into Your Face
Then Smack You Into W.E.C., Just So You Can Know Your Place!

Votes... Hope You Ain't Pissed Evolve... I Can Do Better... Just Didn't Think I Had To.

^I Bolded My Typo... That's Why It's Edited.

Votes Would Be Appreciated.

I dunt know if i can post.. but i'll be battling Horud Sky next week in here(LLL), so im thinkin that makes me eligible to vote....


Axe is mistaken for a Jew...the way Ima circumcisin the head off this Dick...,
^Bad way to start off a verse..a weak played line.

MOD-er-ate-or-ER? Phew!!...Axe.E.Um, Ambiguous, each of ya'll make me Sick.
19-0, is this a played Line?...but this chumps a joke,yet his rec is betta than Mine,

^Whatever u say Brix..Whatever you say..Too me it wasent hard-hitting...


Read this post,follow the Sign...Rethink,hit tha W.E.C,and you'll be nearly Fine...
Student?.. jus like each of us...but unlike us, ya still fail in everythin ya Do,

^What the fuck is this.. you battling a 19-0 vet, and u come with this?

Linez be a blur..nuttin but Fuzz...stamped this gimp wid a F, to show failure in You.

^Easy ass weak punch..nothin special at all..

"Wondered why christmas missed us"...flew right by wen it saw Axe's Skills..,
Not in a mark of respect...jus for the fact that brix got ya popped like a dose of Pillz.

^Bullshit..and more Bullshit..weak personal and a dumb ass filler

How ya been given Powers...wen ya reppin a retirement home like tha Warlords,
OAP'S ride to early Hours...Axe been Flat-lined as i pull away his life support Chords.

^ The best lines in ya whole verse. nice lil personal and a ight closer...Brix came out like if he was battling a newbie, or probably he doesnt care for losing and just happy that he was able to battle Axe..Whatever it is it wasent ill enough to win a battle in Frontlines with a emcee named TupAcIsAliV1996...MOD-er-ate-or-ER, would like to see him say that in a song, probably sound like a reatrd, Im not hating on you Brix u probably have skill, u have potential...If ya punches wasent good who give a fuck how u flow....

Axe..no flaws..took it easy yet also took it to him hard, ya personals was gangsta and hard-hitting, flowed smoothly. No need to quote since u murdered the guy...

Axe won this..I dunt know Brix nor his skills, but if he regularly battles like this.. Bann Him..

uno

^Uh... I Guess That Vote Counts? And Why Didn't You Break Down My Verse?

axe won, simply because i read his all the way through without falling asleep .

plus the only good line that i liked in this battle was the vacuum line.

the newb didnt come that bad, but hes definitely not LLL quality yet -

amby shoulda came harder.
you didnt win by much amby .

^HAHAHA@didnt win by much...hmm most likely Brix hates me no need Feeble to hate me either..::Shuts My fingers::

Axe I think this was more of a tutoriol more than a battle verse. I say that because it shows Brix HOW a battle verse should be.

Takin It Easy On Him, Cuz I Was Taught Not To Hit A Bitch
Fuck It, Punch, Stab And Shoot Brix<---Beat Em Without A Hitch

^The first line had me crack-a-lakin..A nice opener, showing us its okay to hit a bitch, ::Pimpslaps wife::

Kid You Suck, Your Drops Aren’t Even Fit For The Vacuum
Forced To Face You Here… When I Wouldn’t Bitch Slap You

^Nice lil punch.. you suck..vacuum..had me laughing..

And You Admit You’re An HERBivore, You Don’t Want Beef
Attack With Boxers… Just To Make His Triple-L Career Brief

^Nice personal on the first line..thats what u get..change ya stupid crew name! NOW!. Until now I reliaze your backwords. too me. your punch is first then the filler, usually its filler punch filler punch etc...

And I Would Diss Your Crew… But The Name Does It For Me
Took Me So Long To Drop, Cuz… Well… Yours Was Just Borin

^Both lines are nice..simple lil punches yet so true..so so tru..

Give You A Twenty-One-Gun-Salute… Straight Into Your Face
Then Smack You Into W.E.C., Just So You Can Know Your Place

^ Nice closer..

Your verse is chillin, nothing for Brix to cry about yet enough strength to kill him softly, u have skill, i see that, u know that, and just to let u get a headstart, if..no When we meet in LLL, in the champion battle.. dunt think im Brix and come easy.. =] trust me im not being big ego cause i know i would have to put 100 prcent concetration.... uno. Respect.

VOTE - AXE

Brix Came Weak..A Few Punches
Hit Ok Here Nd There, But Din't
Stay Consistent...Nd His Lines Were
A Bit Too Long..Din't Get Str8 To Tha
Point..Axe's Verse Wus Str8..

BRIX - No..

Vote Axe

Just had an overall better verse, better punches & better structure

Brixton came aight... but not well enough to be in the LLL\
Peace & Thanks for Trying... but you are not in the league

1 more vote to end the battle..
4-0 Axe

Vote Axe

Better verse...........it was solid.......offf some parts but pretty good

BriXton will be LLL material soon but not right now

Axe Wins
Brix Loses & is NOT IN the LLL..... yet

Battle CLosed