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Suicidal vs Mac-nif-i-cent
iigh checcin in....mac checc in and ill get mah verse down peace........................
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aight check in too,
i will post my 10 ASAP ................. check check............................................ |
ok les do dis.....
if im flyin ova ya every word like a bird its not cuz i respect u dawg//its cuz im tryna find a perfect place fa me ta shit on// yo soft actin ass aint ready uz a faka u aint ready ta eat me//thas why tha doctors findin lil parts of mcees up in mah feaces// im too toxic wit tonsels im leavin u poppin and meltin like crack//cuz i contaminate ya air sacks like tear gas// mah brains too far aheada ya//ur not a compatibal competitor im takin this foo out like a predator//start feedin off mah raps readin mah scripture like a editor// |
nice verse.......
Verse full of punches I'll lend u and hand and share my wealth.... Name suits you well cuz when u accepted you killed yourself.... Put a deadbolt on this battle for the win cuz I locked this one... Calls his losses a punch so after a battle he claim's he dropped one..... Only hope in not getting a loss in this is if this thread gets slept.... 0-1 already and it still aint lookin good for you and ya rep..... He made a commitment with his name now you should stick to it...... Only time your verse cud contain a raw flow is in vaginal fluid..... Second last line and I'm lookin straight at the 5-0 KO win..... Me commiting suicide almost like your win chances r pretty slim..... lets get some vote........... |
nice verse COME ON YAW DONT SLEEP ON THIS SHIT!............................................. .................................................. ........................................
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can we get some votes yaw?!............................................. .................................................. .......................................
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C'MON YAW STOP SLEEPIN ON BATTLES!!......................................... .................................................. .................................................. ......
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BuMp^^............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................
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ima say mic takes this easily, heres my breakdown......
structure-mic flow-mic vocab-tie wordplay-tie punches-mic personals-mic overall-mic props to the both of ya, but ima say micnificent takes this......yo suicidal empty ur pm box dawg...... peace....... |
1-0 uppin...................................
#1uppin#1uppin#1................... uppin#1uppin#1uppin............... #1uppin#1uppin#1................... uppin#1uppin#1uppin............... |
WE NEED VOTES YAW QUIT SLEEPIN ON SHIT AND JUS VOTE IT DONT TAKE THAT FUKIN LONG!............................................. .
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aight------suicidal--weak flow, no real hard disses--ok structure-------mic-----good flow, couple aight punches--harder personals---vote=mic
pee the sig-------thanx |
nO NEED TO BREAKDOWN COS THE VERSES SPEAK FOR THEMSELVES:
Suidial your punches are weak and your flow is off, need to look at some tutorials or summit............................................ ........ Mic.........flow was perfect, punches strong and wordplay was much better than Suicidal.......................................... ............... Vote: Micnificent ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ HIT THIS UP http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=p.stylez |
^^yo suicidal, check bitchslapped dawg............srry for the freepost............my bad...........................
peace.............. |
3-0 uppin...................................
#2uppin#2uppin#2................... uppin#2uppin#2uppin............... #2uppin#2uppin#2................... uppin#2uppin#2uppin............... |
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