King of Thievez vs X Ecution
 

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40 min blind post hopefully if u see this

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this is ma check in im waitn for king.......................
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u fuckn homo y u duckn u respond to ma callout n dont even check in wut the fuck is wrong wit u..............

ill give u till 10 pm tonite to drop and check in or else ima get another challenger who will atually spit............1

my fault...checkin' in...I just got back home...I went out to eat somrthin' right quick...but...I'm here now...and you still online...so...let's start now...

fine u gotta post like soon tho.............

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you wanted to battle...but I'm still awaitin' the X Ecution...
get raped as ya retribution...this kid's great?????? but yet you losin'...
after this battle you goin' end up runnin' back to ya mom...
how you called X Ecution when I come off the head with an ax in my palm...
you ain't an Exacutioner you just practice fetishes with ya man and a belt...
we both touch kidz when we spit...the difference...I keep my handz to myself...
this battle's one sided...but I'ma have this guy merked from both wayz...
I'ma await the X Ecution...but I'm probably gonna die 1st from old age...
dog...you may have a good record...but that only meanz I son vets...
after I await the X Ecution...I'ma ask if ya wack ass is done yet...

^^ NICE PROPS


KING PEEP DA LINK MAN ME AN U

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85463

go chec kin so we can do this
no rush on da time....lets just get this dont before we both go

SWeet verse
Feelin it
X shud come hard makin this a clean battle
KING ME AN U ITS SET UP

X ECUTION I want to battle u if u down Just set it up an pm me da link
PC
uppin for yall both

Why you cluttering up the boards with ur 4 names and all ya trashy racket/
As an emcee, you couldn't be straight in a psychopathic jacket/
u try n perplex ma shyt but couldnt see the win thru my eyes/
Ill try and elevate ur skill... hopefully like a magician ill make the floor rise/
I think i need to realease caution tape for theives so he kno from the gate/
Cause i keep killin these kids b4 they come out, i guess im increasin the abortion rate/
I'm a spit sum shit, in time watch me eat dis slut/
Punches so hard, ur neck'll hav to send a postcard to ya head just 2 keep in touch/
u Could Stab Me Wit The Alphabet An Couldn’t Kill Me in Text/
Now I shall Sharpen My Pencil An Sentence You To Death/

^^^ X TOOK IT IN YM EYES
CLose battle
KIng came out wit heat
neevr seen him do dat before

never da less X had sum coo punches
sUm where fake
but he took my vote

vote_x

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84491

^^ vote honestly

Ok... King Of Thievez Said Awaiting X Ecution To Many Times

::BreakDown::
Flow-Close
Punches- X
Wordplay-X
Multies-Neither
Vocab-X

Overall Vote- X Ecution

we need breakdownz...like so...

structure-
punchez-
personals-
flow-
multi'z-
creativity-
overall-

and also add vocab to the breakdown too............................................... .................................

no multiez?????? look closer...every line I spit had a multi...

king came nice...punches did'nt have much of an impact...disses were iight..flow was iight..did'nt quite feel the creativity....

X came nice also...punches hit a lil harder...disses were bout equal...nice flow...but X capped it off with his last four line which took this battle...

vote X!

aight ima say king of thievez takes this, heres my breakdown......

structure-tie
flow-hella close so ima say tie
vocab-tie
multis-king
creativity-uhhh......king
punches-x
personals-tie
overall-king

props to the both of ya, but ima say king of thievez takes this.....

peace.......