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Kosta 10-13-03 11:59 PM

Empty thoughts.
 
asleep on my block, my cardboard box
central ave. where what your looking for was lost
or caught, by someone undeserving
murmuring about how the boy stopped his drumming
you see i lost all of my teeth so each
night i leave my cup out as i sleep up on them but hey,
the tooth fairy isn't coming. so you see
every second in time is second to life, i come first
but each time i beg it hurts, this condition
where people offer their two cents, but i say fuck their opinions
because 4 is better, and a quarter is magnificent
and dollars. holy shit kids, i cry to sit with it
die to spend one. try to let some into my next slum
from place to place, money is my only ethic.
albuquerque to new york to san francisco jersey and china.
empty desires feed for empty thoughts i could buy ya.

Sureal 10-14-03 12:08 AM

Sand, You Amaze Me yet Again.
You Take Such A Simple Point
Of View And Make It So Complex
And Make It Nearly Perfect.
Awesome Job Alex.
Keep This Shit Coming.

shiznit 10-14-03 12:20 AM

Random stuff sometimes is really fun to write about ..I mean just not caring about the whole scheme but just what comes to your mind but at the same time giving it an artistic style kinda way.

Well its hard to say its empty cuz some of it makes sense.
Your a great writer and you put the same amount of emotions in ur works.

I loved it.

WORD~PERFECT 10-14-03 12:37 AM

THIS WAS A HOT JOINT PULLING everything togeather though so many scattered concepts were there.
you did it brilliantly and i cant waite to see more

yog_dogg 10-14-03 02:19 AM

yeah that was an ill drop dawg i love the subject and u just turned it into words so well i enjoyed readin it.. the vocab was ill along wit the flow and everythin

gotaloveforrap 10-14-03 02:32 AM

this was off the fuckin hook homie......a simple topic turned into some great shit....i was feelin ur vocab and wordplay...like i said u had a simple topic, but made for a great read...overall excellent drop homie.....

peace......


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