Tökën Vs C_Drama
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10 lines max No d/r votes No hate votes No crew votes you spit first i'll drop asap after good luck homie |
ight, ....just saw the thread..........checkin in
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ight i'm checked in........ i'll spit after u do..... i'm in school so if u spit and i dont reply right away dont worry its not a no show...........................................
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No1 will see you shine when you're always "left behind" like D-12 in your sig
Got fucked by Eazy E now he's "spreadin Illness so quick" (EzE had HIV) Rockin herbs in ya Avatar doesnt mean your doper than weed merking this man and all he can say to me is "How can this be?" Couldnt catch yer flow even I left you wit blood gushin out ya vein Look at his name....what can he bring? What? 30 ounces of pain? Thinks he can hold his own weight cuz he fondled his genitals I Bet keyin his verse with one finger crossed [H]opin [I]m not a [V]et okay Sayin you ill....is like lookin for dirt specks in black clothin, it's not really obvious I got more punches than Bruce Lee but if I see you and he I'm leave holes in ya [buddy Lee 'n' Nauticas] |
no prob, im in school also......
drop when u can 1 .................................. |
ayo, repostin the verse (its da same shit just chopped off like 1 word for da flow, did it in class thats y)
THIS iS THE REAL VERSE No1 sees you shine when you're always "left behind" like D-12 in your sig Got fucked by Eazy E now he's "spreadin Illness so quick" (EzE had HIV) Rockin herbs in ya Avatar doesnt mean you're doper than weed merking this man and all he can say to me is "How can this be?" Couldnt catch yer flow if I left you wit blood gushin out ya vein Look at his name...what can he bring?...30 ounces of pain??? Thinks he [holds his own weight] cuz he fondled his genitals I bet Keyin his verse with one finger crossed [H]opin [I]m not a [V]et okay (diff flow here) Sayin you ill....is like lookin for dirt specks in black clothin, it's not really obvious I got more punches than Bruce Lee but if I see you and he I'm leave holes in ya [buddy Lee 'n' Nauticas] |
ight man thanks for the time..... sorry took so long
Good Luck Your name aint correct... cause u aint battled me before Now do you C Drama homie... And this is just one metaphore With a sig full of herb wins... i wouldnt rep that publicly After 2 ups... i go up 2-0... so u stopped at uppin 3 You steppin to a vet... dissin my crew more than u did me Dissin bout HIVs... Man you ain't even elite enough for a custom avy [his avy is a default when u sign up] Tellin me you're in school... they teachin u how to build fences? With 18.83 posts a day... Whose gon pay for those kind of expenses? 6-7 and considered a heavy weight for havin nothin better to do then post You rhymes always come short on punches so you jot them down on sticky notes And that... is word... like whoa |
I got more punches than Bruce Lee but if I see you and he I'm leave holes in ya [buddy Lee 'n' Nauticas]
LMAO at c drama ahah that was good i felt your verse fell together very well \ token Now do you C Drama homie... And this is just one metaphore that an your AVY line were both decent on the vote for creativity purposees mainly i vote C |
Hmm...
Not a Very Explained Vote But Honest Vote I Guess Uppin 1 ...................... ................. .......... ... .. . |
wasnt feelin c drama........not really at all..........you need lots structure work.........token punches hit alot harder......best opener in this battle.....better closure.........
harder hitting puches=winner winner=token |
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^^^^ werd..........pollin for this vote..... |
pretty dope battle from u both....C Drama had some tight punches....Token had more personals, better vocabulary, and better multis......u both had a good flow but i think Token got it since his lines weren't as stretched....so here's a breakdown for u two....
Multis - Token Metas - C Drama Personals - Token Punches - C Drama Wordplay - C Drama RhymeScheme - Token Flow - Token Vocabulary - Token Overall - Token good battle....but Token gets my vote due to winning in a majority of categories.....nice shit from u both though.... peace 4:20 |
ya, dis would prolly b da first time i'd agree wit ppl when dey say my flow was offish, but neways...........
uppin for more votes on this one tho |
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