Supreme Blood...
 

Before I fully developed a mentally working brain,indeed
it was there, waiting to emerge as the dominant gene

The Gene Runs In Through My Body, I'm Feelin It in My Vein
From Vessels from The Spinal Cord,Coordinated By The Brain
Controlling My Every Movement, An Instant Before It Is Done
My Body Works Normally,Hormones Rise Each Day Like The Sun
My Pain And Perserverence Felt As A Usual Everyday Action
Why Does It Happen, Knowing Every Cause Theres A Rection
Supremacy In My Blood, I Feel It In My Vein, Still In There Runnin
Is This The Cause Of Pain I Feel,Or Perserverence Summoned?
Maybe It Is, The Cause Is Still Unknown, Yet I Know My Purpose
And Even Though My Pains Bad Now, I Know There Is Worse Yet
I'm Seeing My Talents Overwhelmin, My Child In My Semen,Blazing
Lookin For Actions, Sittin In The Responsible Cause,Yet Gazing
Because I'm Still Searchin For The Answers, Of Why I Am Plagued
And Although I Am Slept On, All Those Who Read Still Are Amazed
My Plage, My Curse, Whatever You Want To Call It, Ruining Life
If I Could Find The Answers, The Cities In My System, Rid Of Strife
I Am Plagued By My Unholy Body,Holding Crosses And Crucifixions
Because I Was On The Sin Battlefield, But In Action I was Missin'
But Knowing My Life Comes To An End, Sooner Or Later, My Friend
You Don't Know If Tomorrow Is Promised, So Today You Should Repent


Blah...I'm Done.

Thats Better Then Ya Battles I'll Tell Ya That!
But Good Job, Thats like My Style Mayn The Capitalzin....


^Sick

Muchas Gracias, Lol, I Suck At Battling Because I Never Cared To Elevate in That. Uppin!

that was ill......i was feelin the vocab and wordplay.......try and include some more multis next time though......ur content and topic were pretty original......definetely feelin it.......overall good drop, cant wait to read more........

peace.......

Hey more Comments Guys!

Upping To Page 1

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

Big Up BX..oh yea..feedback

Hmm, i didnt quite get the point of this, it started out like a biology lesson the turned into friendship...
flow was definetly a strong point, word choice and vocab well well done
the mulits were lacking, they were either 2 simple, or lacking in places

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636

(yes thats the same link 2x..no one ever responds)

Ha Ha Ha Ha ya f***in ryhmes are daft!!!
There so f***in feeble that its makin me Laff!!!
Your wastin ya time
with those f***in lines!!!
Try and come up wit a half decent ryhme!!!!
Surely your rhymes are better than these?
U look, smell and act like some f***in disease!!!
Your bitch is a dawg
Nuttin but a f***in tease!!!
Her pus*sys disgustin, F***in coverted in grease!!!

WTF????
Jesus Christ You Are Stupid.
Maybe You Should Learn To Write, And Don't Block Out Your Fuckin Words You Fuckin Faggot.

Your face is a sight
For sore F***in eyes!!!!
Tell ya mam you love her
Before u say your goodbye's!!!!!!
Cuz 2nite ma friend
U sleep in the ground
that is of course if your body is found!!!!

well s.DOt.kiddz im new to this site!1 just testin the waters

o.k.

who u callin a faggot anyway?? U r quite sfae bahind a computer screen ain't ya!!

Shut The Fuck Up! Make Your Own Thread, Don't Freestyle in My Fucking Thread. Especially Your Gay Ass Battle Verse...Just...Fuckit, I'm Gettin You Banned, so Shut The Fuck Up.

^^^ignore the fool......this was nice man.....like someone siad the capitilisin is a bit awkward and

Because I'm Still Searchin For The Answers, Of Why I Am Plagued
And Although I Am Slept On, All Those Who Read Still Are Amazed

was nice......dope stuff man

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