just a keystyle relieving stress
 

when ever the beef is on pussy niccas run for cover
not knowin bullets slide through metal like butter
cuz in my hood if i dun know you we gotta problem papi
and i dunno know about you but i like to solve em papi
either its you leaving or a meeting with the shotti
it really dun even matter cuz the feds aint gonna stop me
i grew up around drug dealers and coke fiends
that put guns in my hand the day i turned 13
moms was scared for me tryed to send me off to the suburbs
then i started fuckin white bitches and sellin my rubbers
till this one regret bitch told me she was gonna be a mother
then she got her brothers wantin till kill none other
so i handled my business sad to say had to abort it
and to tell the truth we wasnt ready i couldnt afford it
but till this day i hope my unborn child knows i adore it
and it hurts so bad i got no place to store it
thats why i sleep with random girls and fuck with random niccas
i dun pull it out unless im cockin back and let go with the trigga
cuz this world is real crazy sometimes i think it hates me
cuz my life has been fucked up so much i think god tries to rape me
and then they wanna point the finger at a nicca that feels like hes lost in the world
i didnt have a set future i was tossed in this world
expected to be nuttin but a statistic cuz they made my mind conflicted
encrypted in my life is a number or razors to slit my wrist with

Nice! I learned about you!...If it's true anyways

i grew up around drug dealers and coke fiends
that put guns in my hand the day i turned 13
^ Me Too!


then i started fuckin white bitches and sellin my rubbers
till this one regret bitch told me she was gonna be a mother
^ ugh, Revulting

then she got her brothers wantin till kill none other
so i handled my business sad to say had to abort it
^ What A Bitch

and to tell the truth we wasnt ready i couldnt afford it
but till this day i hope my unborn child knows i adore it
^ Omg How Sad

Keep it commin.....

oh ya'll shut up, yall both live in tall homes too high for flyin birds with nice paves and curves



lol j/p

its iiight, flow was mad basic, good fo a key tho

just think u cud do alot more on the rhyme scheme, feel me?

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^ Like I Thought Ur Wordz Are A Joke! LoL

that was hella ill for a newb........ur flow was a little basic, but thatll come wit experience......ur vocab and wordplay was a little weak....try and fit in some more mutlis next time......ur content and topic was a little played.......but it went well with how u felt......it made for a good read, cant wait to read more from ya.......

peace........

The Emotional Power of This Piece Was Amzing. I Feel Where Your Coming From, But On The Same Way, Your Imagery Was Weak due To Lack of Good Vocabulary. You Made Of A Decent Piece, but You Have To Upp Your Flow And Vocab, Peace.

yo thanks for your input....lotta love goin on thats hot i like that, but yea shit was a ruff day so i had to get that in, im not used to text battles and stuff like that im used to spittin like for real so i gotta adjust my words and shit like that cuz when im spittin real the shit hits hard but on here its just mediocre cus you guys aint hearin it you just reading it....i guess it would help to not battle or keystyle listening to beats cuz no one else can hear them....i'll learn some day...again thanks alot

Nice i really like this one.keep spittin yo shit.like it


CTF(represent)

that was a good read
just work on vocab and wordplay
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besides some tweaks in ur vocab and flow, this was great

you got some personal crap and thats always great, better than all that bullshit about how youre gonna pop a cap in someones ass or how u smoke 321523532653521426236343 pounds of weed every night

nice drop, keep it comin, im sure u'll get even better with time