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DiverseSyndicate 10-15-03 04:50 AM

~BuMs~
 
another everyday thing i seem to see bums, poor folks who got it bad livin in tha ghetto-slums, for protection somes selection fo metal-guns//

hate to see tha site that plagues in these places, visions of all different faces, they need jobs is what tha case-is//

some people wouldnt hire-them, everybody else always fired-them, now they drinkin raw and stinkin why u think they always tired-then//

no money for drugs so they stick to old english, and cigarettes to make there mold-relinquish, just some old-delinquents//

they brain missin strips of data, out used like tha original beta, some people dont understand so they some hatas//

a small sign reading spare-some-change, small towners think its rare-and-strange//

i feel remorse and most of all pity, for these simple beings livin in tha ghetto slums of tha city...

Dedicated to tha Bums survivin livin out in tha ware house district, keep ya head up.~1~

yog_dogg 10-15-03 04:52 AM

that was some good shit dawg the flow was good and so was the vocab dawg i enjoyed yo shit.. keep postin and doin yo shit

WORD~PERFECT 10-15-03 05:23 AM

i shouldnt comment you know your good and hate to feed egos but this was on point and i want a collab

DiverseSyndicate 10-15-03 01:52 PM

thanks for the replies, i like to write about what i see, and i dont live that far from tha warehouse district in houston so i do see alot of bums and what-not, its a real sad site, i dont like to see those type of people doin so horribly, i help if i can but all i can contribute is a few dollars every once in a while.~1~

DiverseSyndicate 10-15-03 10:27 PM

uppin for this piece to get replied to.~1~

DiverseSyndicate 10-16-03 05:14 PM

uppin this^^^


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