...::Frozen Hearts::...
 

Never felt the warmth of the radiance of another person
What was it that constantly made all the lovers divertin?
Away from her was the only place where love ever stood
Only the ashes of relationships laid like her love was wood
Could she ever love with all this frozen ice on her heart?
Needed to get an ice axe and axe the ice for love to start
The ice stopped her and dropped her to be a part of love
Never wanted to be a house wife but to be a tart at pubs
Emotions tugs..Devotion to love is all she ever wants now
The ice is seen on the exterior and everybody just frowns
Now she wants that crown that her daddy used to give her
..''My little Princess''..
Is all she ever thinks about while her emotions grows bigger
To hold another figure..Because now maths just wouldn't do
The only words that came out of her fragile mouth was..I do
Very few's affection made a connection with her frozen soul
Left all alone but this bitter warmth will never go on its own
So she was thrown.. And smashed up these icicled feelings
For her passion of effection to be let free without sheilding

damn man....uv elevated....

vocab especialy..!!! lol


need i say more...

ohh....ill topic....EVERY man can relate to this shit...stayed well on it....

GREAT READ MAN....Dopeness

up :)

VERY EASY TO RELATE EVEN WITH A MORE COMPLEX TEXT WHICH VERY GOOD.YOU ESCENTUATED YOUR MEANING AND IMAGRY EASILY IN MERE WORD USAGE AND ANYONE CAN RELATE TO THE EMOTION EFFECTION AND SO FORTH,,,,,,,
THIS WAS A HELL ILL READ POP.

^^^i have nothing more to add what they havent...nive stuff just uppin it so more folks can read....i preferred this to what u dropped just before(forgot the name lol)......whiole verse was sound so if you want me to show you the lines i liked....

Never felt the warmth of the radiance of another person
What was it that constantly made all the lovers divertin?
Away from her was the only place where love ever stood
Only the ashes of relationships laid like her love was wood
Could she ever love with all this frozen ice on her heart?
Needed to get an ice axe and axe the ice for love to start
The ice stopped her and dropped her to be a part of love
Never wanted to be a house wife but to be a tart at pubs
Emotions tugs..Devotion to love is all she ever wants now
The ice is seen on the exterior and everybody just frowns
Now she wants that crown that her daddy used to give her
..''My little Princess''..
Is all she ever thinks about while her emotions grows bigger
To hold another figure..Because now maths just wouldn't do
The only words that came out of her fragile mouth was..I do
Very few's affection made a connection with her frozen soul
Left all alone but this bitter warmth will never go on its own
So she was thrown.. And smashed up these icicled feelings
For her passion of effection to be let free without sheilding

....bloah...all nice.......1
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