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Never do what they do
The keyboards and rhymes, sick thoughts and lines
Passion for expression drove to make sick wordings mine Edification was desirable, spiteful rap wasn't conceivable But net's full of arrogant, shallow or wacks trying to be believable So I got absorbed, lost da' warm retort & joined a numb accord The roots speakin' to me to be myself & spit with god's resolve |
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like it , big up a bit short but effective, nice vocab and flows well
but not sure if the last line works wit ACCORD, but big ups, keep spittin..............................peace!!!! |
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I hate it when you read some shit and your getting into it wondering what else they gonna bring to the table...
i felt the sample it was tight... just woulda liked to read a lil more.. |
woulda liked to see it a little bit longer but a hot piece none the less................propz............
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it was to short but i loved the flow and the vocab in the keystyle
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who wanna battle
holla back at me |
yeah set it up and such, upping fo' mo' feedback
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too short man............but it was good nonetheless, its not good to make someone start liking to read yer shit then it ends after like 6 lines
but wuteva good drop hit ma open mic up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86934 |
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