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brainsurgeon 10-15-03 04:02 PM

Never do what they do
 
The keyboards and rhymes, sick thoughts and lines
Passion for expression drove to make sick wordings mine
Edification was desirable, spiteful rap wasn't conceivable
But net's full of arrogant, shallow or wacks trying to be believable
So I got absorbed, lost da' warm retort & joined a numb accord
The roots speakin' to me to be myself & spit with god's resolve

brainsurgeon 10-15-03 04:48 PM

upping

trueinterlude 10-15-03 05:06 PM

like it , big up a bit short but effective, nice vocab and flows well
but not sure if the last line works wit ACCORD,
but big ups, keep spittin..............................peace!!!!

brainsurgeon 10-16-03 07:49 AM

upping

BLeeCH 10-16-03 09:51 AM

I hate it when you read some shit and your getting into it wondering what else they gonna bring to the table...

i felt the sample it was tight... just woulda liked to read a lil more..

Trah Siph 10-16-03 11:11 AM

woulda liked to see it a little bit longer but a hot piece none the less................propz............

brainsurgeon 10-20-03 08:38 AM

upps

brainsurgeon 10-21-03 02:57 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by brainsurgeon
upping

Legendary_EmCee 10-21-03 03:14 PM

it was to short but i loved the flow and the vocab in the keystyle

quise__baby 10-21-03 03:16 PM

who wanna battle



holla back at me

brainsurgeon 10-21-03 03:18 PM

yeah set it up and such, upping fo' mo' feedback

Da_Legend 10-21-03 03:48 PM

too short man............but it was good nonetheless, its not good to make someone start liking to read yer shit then it ends after like 6 lines

but wuteva

good drop

hit ma open mic up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86934


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