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SpL!T 10-15-03 08:43 PM

(FoR Ma)<...:::One(+)Love:::...>(OnE-LovE)
 
Dear: jessie
You know u ma sexyness girl.....
nuthin but love goin to ya direction..
Just thought i'd take a break from issues an tell you how i'm feelin..
This for you girl....
Ma "One(+)Love"

................::::::::::One(+)Love:::::::::::::: :...........

[[Verse 1]]
[['Speach..Satisfies' my eyes gratified ta see ya lines defy locations reach to 'Breach..This-Shattered-Mind']]
[[Speakin'..Scattered-Crimes' of hearts every time words exchange i'm left 'Creepin'..With-Infactuated..Strides']]
[['Dreamin'..While..Matters..Bind' mental pictures fire my feelings hights of
'Passion's' baby you 'Gotta..Be..Mine']]
[['I'm..Deteriorating' this shits infuriating, why cant you be in my arms satisfy-ing,thaz juss 'Life,..Here-We-Are-Waiting']]
With
[['Spines..Filled..With-Antisipactieen' tingling with statements touchin the souls center
'Lines..Wear..Emotieens..Are..Bleeding']]
[['Piles..Of..Feelings' im revealing, i'm spilling to ya mental so when you sleep its
'My..Smiles..Your..Seeing']]
[['Romancing..Cerebrals' threw letters your letting-me-know juss how you truely are
'Stancing..This-Continuis-Issue']]
of
[['Locations..Conflict-Between-Blooms' of loves moves, you dont understand the lengths i'm 'Taking..To-Some-Day-Be-With-You']]
[['Grasped..Bear' you lay right there next to me able to hear sweet wispers
'Passed..Threw-Ya-Ear']]
This goes
[['Be-ond..Sexual-Dwellings' this some true shit i'm dealin, neelin on my nees beggin
'Please-For-God's..Intelectual-Being']]
To step
[[Along..A-Love-Complexly-Fuled..Greeving' and heel my beating heart instead of
'Wrong-ing..A-Quest-For-Pure..Feelings']]

[[Chorus]]
[[All my words are for you]]
[[Take a break from drugs and criminal views,]]
[[Let your lights shine threw, heal and brighten this disturbs minds tune]]
[[And you should know baby,]]
[[I'd only do somethin like this for a woman holdin my one love....like you]]

[[Verse 2]]
[['Jersey..Angel' blessin the streets,while she enables a pure glow to break
'Ev-ery..Lable']]
[['Surely..A-Fable' is what my mind is thinkin while its ticken to the beat of you hearts
'Serenidy..Against-One-Unstable']]
[['Identities..Forgotten',i'm rotten in prissen my mind state is holdin back your every
'Entities..Problems']]
[['Felonies..Unimportent' when i'm sportin you legs around my abdomin, grabin them
'Beautifly-Crafted..Lips-Supports-Till-End']]
Baby I'd spend all
[['Eternity..On-Lock' if it ment you out the spot i'll serve 25 to life,for you i'd feed
'Athorities..A-Glock']]
[['Shore-ly..My-Slot' will be filled to the top with dirt, i'll wach the last breath get
'Abruply..Robbed']]
In my head is
[['Only..One-Lil-Thought' and thats the haunting caugh of lonlyness, life without u,a
'Dynasty..Aloft']]
From
[['My-Baby..Im-Distraught' i've faught to show how i really feel and couldn't handle a
'Cemetary..Wen-I-Know-Wut-Ive-Lost']]
[['A-Spiritual..Blessin' baby you on my side next to me neckin, i'm strechin for you this
'Lyrical..Caressin']]
Now ima throw
[['Numerical..Presition' 23 lines of a man, a mission, and his goal to show you
'Unbearable..Submissions']]
Of often
[['Unhearable..Wishs' baby for you i'd do, with a smile hugs, kisses and
'Undeniable..Feelins']]

[[Chorus]]
[[All my words are for you]]
[[Take a break from drugs and criminal views,]]
[[Let your lights shine threw, heal and brighten this disturbs minds tune]]
[[And you should know baby,]]
[[I'd only do somethin like this for a woman holdin my one love....like you]]

SpL!T 10-16-03 07:23 AM

Dam....
u peoples got ya eyes wide shut on my shit........
dont know wut i gota do ta get sum feedback......
cuz i know yawl seein this

WORD~PERFECT 10-16-03 07:26 AM

I DONT LIKE THE FORMAT BUT CONTENT MEANING AND ALL ASPECTS THE I USE TO CRITQUE WERE FOUND HERE VERY AGRESSIVE YET EMOTIONAL PIECE.....
ID EASILY GIV THI 10/10 INDEED POP STAY UP AND DO YOUR THING...
P.S.
IF YOU INTERESTED OMENS ARE CURRENTLY RECRUITING SEARCHING FOR FAMILY MEMBERS WITH YOUR TALENT

-ElocuShun- 10-16-03 07:34 AM

very nice piece.............the layout was crazy but it was all good.......the piece was endless talent........mad props to ya...keep it up

SpL!T 10-16-03 03:46 PM

ayo WORD......
i could very possibly be interested in that offer.....
Can u PM me wit so info on who i gota talk to......
an ur active roster so i can check the cats u got reppin.....
holla mayn .....
n thanx fo ya feedback

SpL!T 10-17-03 04:07 PM

up..

MP~PHASIZ 10-17-03 04:36 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by -Brixton-
very nice piece.............the layout was crazy but it was all good.......the piece was endless talent........mad props to ya...keep it up

^Word

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SpL!T 10-18-03 08:04 AM

^^^ayo no doubt bout it mayn....
i'll peep up right ina sec...
N' i'm looking for a crew too...
So if ne of u like what you see juss holla...
I'm new so will prolly take first offers..
~PeAc3~


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