Asylum Gates/Dear Omens
 

The Asylum is my sanctuary I find peace beyond it's gates
I write for mental exercise meditate on any wrong mistakes
I funnel out all wicked thoughts this is a ritual of purification
Though it doesn't help me physically to cure this sick patient
To lose myself in the head is divine to design keen wordplay
I've been keeping it nutritious with 3 square screams per day
I shall project for you my brain in 2099 bar slide show
My verses are footnotes to images that let my dark side show
The Asylum is the ideal place to set my diseased mind free
Where there hangs Approach With Caution sign's where I'd be
Come out and play with a native as long as we're not related
I'll rape everybody in here so now consider Open Mic raided
The ashes and debris scattered about keeps it in perspective
I tagged the gates with an O representing The Omens objective
Which is to rip shit and spit shit then rub herb faces in shit
It's way too fucking bright in here I absolutely must dim shit

HOOK
Behold the Asylum Gates in your halls lies my fate
Give me faith when I have had more than I can take
We The Omens hereby celebrate our gift to elevate
Don't hesitate to cremate when I reach my death date

*flipping it*

Dear Omens my beloved family where do I start?
Excuse me for being sentimental I bare you my heart
I'll rep the crew in the afterlife I'm prepared to die hard
Fam always dare to try hard let nothing tear crew apart
We don't got to go down beyond the shadow of doubt
The climb up is tough but worth it so let's battle it out
The Omens equal sick text flex brawn like Charles Atlas
Advance despite many obstacles cats do marvel at this
Text and verbal be forever eternal you better learn hoes
Or we'll light your corny ass on fire pop you like kernals
Refuse to give it up and if necessary then shift it up
Time to lift it up T.O. motherfuckers let's just live it up
The Omens Empire in this we are so known to vent fire
Heat up your temp higher expire you and your entire HA

HOOK
The Omens it was written like the book of Romans
Scripts remain unmatchable bow down to no mens
Sexy...we got what it takes to get u text heads open
Ain't it a bitch we've seen more pussies than trojans

TIGHT ISH MAMI VERY POETIC AND SERIOUSLY MAKES PEOPLE REFLECT INTO THEIR OWN MIND STAY UP FAM

Thanks :)

Come on time to wake up people :)

ill shit boo, this piece was a good rep and a good thank you type verse towards your crew, keep droppin tha hotshit in this bitch.~1~

lmao @ your finisher in da hook...lol
"Sexy...we got what it takes to get u text heads open
Ain't it a bitch we've seen more pussies than trojans"

you had a good flow goin, kept a good rhyme scheme...
you had some good wordplay, and the emotion in this shit
was great... you elevatin yo'self quick... props... props...

~Ashy~

Ain't it a bitch we've seen more pussies than trojans
VERY sick line i was feelin that tremendously^^
keep this shit up yo.

nice shit.
some lines confusing if u like i could tell u.

Thanks for the feedback and Insert and I sort of wanted people to ponder over what I said. I consider anything I write a good piece if it get's people thinking and shit. :)

Nice rep

And some nice wordplay, ...lol^^
ur flow was on point, ....and it was a real nice read, .....u gto some potential damn ....keep em droppin , ...

Props

thx :)

uppin

that was a nice peice, wordplay was good, vocab was off the hook, well done, i liked it

^^^^uppin